短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起〉不计分。
I have many hobbies, among that fishing ranks first. It is fishing that have helped me improve my self-control.
Three years ago my academic performance is not satisfactory for my lack of patience. Then my father came up a good idea and taught me to fish. Having been told that fishing was full of funs, I followed him without hesitation. To his surprise, fishing turned out to be more difficult than I had expected it. I didn't remember how many times I had failed before I caught a fish. Amazing, the patience I developed by learning to fish has a influence on my study. Now I'd like to share my experience with those who have the same trouble, encouraged them to study with full devotion and attention.
答案
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起〉不计分。
I have many hobbies, among that fishing ranks first. It is fishing that have helped me improve my self-control.
Three years ago my academic performance is not satisfactory for my lack of patience. Then my father came up a good idea and taught me to fish. Having been told that fishing was full of funs, I followed him without hesitation. To his surprise, fishing turned out to be more difficult than I had expected it. I didn't remember how many times I had failed before I caught a fish. Amazing, the patience I developed by learning to fish has a influence on my study. Now I'd like to share my experience with those who have the same trouble, encouraged them to study with full devotion and attention.
答案
苏19057182-3号