假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第1 1处起)不计分。
Dear Anna,
How is everything going? It has been a long time when we parted. Looked back on my high school days, I owe a lot to you. You are much of a friend than a teacher. Your patient and kindness have a far-reaching influence on me. What impresses me most is that you always encouraged me when I fail in the exam. With your help, I couldn't have been achieved my dream. I miss the smiles on my pretty face; I miss days in your interesting classes. I will miss you forever where I go.
【答案】1. when → since
2. Looked → Looking
3. much → more
4. patient → patience
5. fail → failed
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第1 1处起)不计分。
Dear Anna,
How is everything going? It has been a long time when we parted. Looked back on my high school days, I owe a lot to you. You are much of a friend than a teacher. Your patient and kindness have a far-reaching influence on me. What impresses me most is that you always encouraged me when I fail in the exam. With your help, I couldn't have been achieved my dream. I miss the smiles on my pretty face; I miss days in your interesting classes. I will miss you forever where I go.
【答案】1. when → since
2. Looked → Looking
3. much → more
4. patient → patience
5. fail → failed
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