短文改错 I found a wallet a couple of weeks ago in the car, where I was renting. The wallet had credit
英语试题 07-26
短文改错
I found a wallet a couple of weeks ago in the car, where I was renting. The wallet had credit cards but quite a bit of cash inside. The gentleman it was belonged to happened to be celebrating his birthday that same day. I was able to mail him his wallet. A few weeks later I receive this. “Jamie, I can’t tell you how fortunately I felt when I received my wallet sending by you. It is rare that someone can return a wallet, let alone return with 100% of its content. I’ll be thankful for you forever.” Tears filled my eye when I finished reading a note.
【答案】1. where →which
2. but →and
3. 删掉was
4. receive →received
5. fortunately →fortunate
6. sending →sent
7. 在return后加it
8. for →to
9. eye →eyes
10. a →the
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者捡到一个钱包，物归原主，之后失主写信感谢，这让作者非常感动。
【详解】1.考查定语从句。句意：几周前我在我租的车里发现了一个钱包。分析可知，“I was renting”应是之前名词“the car”的非限制性定语从句，先行词在从句中作宾语，应用关系代词which引导从句。故将where改为which。
2.考查连词。句意：钱包里有信用卡和相当多的现金。分析可知，“credit cards”与“quite a bit of cash”应是并列关系，应用and连接。故将but改为and。
3.考查被动语态。句意：它的主人正好在同一天庆祝他的生日。分析可知，“belong to”，意为“属于”，为不及物动词短语，无被动结构。故将was删掉。
4.考查时态。句意：几周后，我收到了这个（便条）。根据时间状语“A few weeks later”且结合文章讲述过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故将receive改为received。
5.考查形容词。句意：杰米，当我收到你寄来的钱包时，我感到非常幸运。分析可知，感叹句谓语为felt，意为“感觉；感到”，为感官系动词，应用形容词作表语。故将fortunately改为fortunate。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意：杰米，当我收到你寄来的钱包时，我感到非常幸运。分析可知，表达“由你寄来”含义的动词短语“send by you”应是之前名词wallet的后置定语，与其之间为被动关系，应用过去分词形式。故将sending改为sent。
7.考查代词。句意：很少有人会把钱包退回去，更不用连同钱包的东西一件不漏地归还。根据句意可知，这里指不仅将钱包还给失主，更重要的是连同钱包的东西一件不漏地归还，所以，这里应有it指代前面的wallet，放在return之后作其宾语。故在return后加it。
8.考查介词。句意：我将永远对你心存感激。be thankful to sb.，固定结构，意为“对某人心存感激”。故将for改为to。
9.考查名词复数。句意：当我读完那张便条时，眼泪涌上了我的眼睛。分析可知，eye，可数名词，应用名词复数形式。故将eye改为eyes。
10.考查冠词。句意：当我读完那张便条时，眼泪涌上了我的眼睛。分析可知，“note”应是指前文提及的失主写的便条，应用定冠词the表特指。故将a改为the。
【点睛】短文改错考点之区分形和副
形容词和副词混用是短文改错题常考考点之一。考生需要区分形容词和副词在句中的作用和用法，形容词多用来作定语，表语和补语；而副词只能在句中作状语，修饰动词，形容词，副词或整个句子。只要弄清其不同的作用和用法，很容易判断是否存在形副混淆错误。比如文章的第5处错误：
Jamie, I can’t tell you how fortunately I felt when I received my wallet sending by you.
“how fortunately I felt”为感叹句，该句中的谓语为felt，感官系动词，应由形容词作其表语。故该句中“fortunately”为形副混淆错误，故将其改为形容词形式：fortunate。
I found a wallet a couple of weeks ago in the car, where I was renting. The wallet had credit cards but quite a bit of cash inside. The gentleman it was belonged to happened to be celebrating his birthday that same day. I was able to mail him his wallet. A few weeks later I receive this. “Jamie, I can’t tell you how fortunately I felt when I received my wallet sending by you. It is rare that someone can return a wallet, let alone return with 100% of its content. I’ll be thankful for you forever.” Tears filled my eye when I finished reading a note.
【答案】1. where →which
2. but →and
3. 删掉was
4. receive →received
5. fortunately →fortunate
6. sending →sent
7. 在return后加it
8. for →to
9. eye →eyes
10. a →the
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者捡到一个钱包，物归原主，之后失主写信感谢，这让作者非常感动。
【详解】1.考查定语从句。句意：几周前我在我租的车里发现了一个钱包。分析可知，“I was renting”应是之前名词“the car”的非限制性定语从句，先行词在从句中作宾语，应用关系代词which引导从句。故将where改为which。
2.考查连词。句意：钱包里有信用卡和相当多的现金。分析可知，“credit cards”与“quite a bit of cash”应是并列关系，应用and连接。故将but改为and。
3.考查被动语态。句意：它的主人正好在同一天庆祝他的生日。分析可知，“belong to”，意为“属于”，为不及物动词短语，无被动结构。故将was删掉。
4.考查时态。句意：几周后，我收到了这个（便条）。根据时间状语“A few weeks later”且结合文章讲述过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故将receive改为received。
5.考查形容词。句意：杰米，当我收到你寄来的钱包时，我感到非常幸运。分析可知，感叹句谓语为felt，意为“感觉；感到”，为感官系动词，应用形容词作表语。故将fortunately改为fortunate。
6.考查非谓语动词。句意：杰米，当我收到你寄来的钱包时，我感到非常幸运。分析可知，表达“由你寄来”含义的动词短语“send by you”应是之前名词wallet的后置定语，与其之间为被动关系，应用过去分词形式。故将sending改为sent。
7.考查代词。句意：很少有人会把钱包退回去，更不用连同钱包的东西一件不漏地归还。根据句意可知，这里指不仅将钱包还给失主，更重要的是连同钱包的东西一件不漏地归还，所以，这里应有it指代前面的wallet，放在return之后作其宾语。故在return后加it。
8.考查介词。句意：我将永远对你心存感激。be thankful to sb.，固定结构，意为“对某人心存感激”。故将for改为to。
9.考查名词复数。句意：当我读完那张便条时，眼泪涌上了我的眼睛。分析可知，eye，可数名词，应用名词复数形式。故将eye改为eyes。
10.考查冠词。句意：当我读完那张便条时，眼泪涌上了我的眼睛。分析可知，“note”应是指前文提及的失主写的便条，应用定冠词the表特指。故将a改为the。
【点睛】短文改错考点之区分形和副
形容词和副词混用是短文改错题常考考点之一。考生需要区分形容词和副词在句中的作用和用法，形容词多用来作定语，表语和补语；而副词只能在句中作状语，修饰动词，形容词，副词或整个句子。只要弄清其不同的作用和用法，很容易判断是否存在形副混淆错误。比如文章的第5处错误：
Jamie, I can’t tell you how fortunately I felt when I received my wallet sending by you.
“how fortunately I felt”为感叹句，该句中的谓语为felt，感官系动词，应由形容词作其表语。故该句中“fortunately”为形副混淆错误，故将其改为形容词形式：fortunate。
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