3.呼吁参加户外活动。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
various outdoor activities; appreciate; a sense of; strengthens my willpower; as long as;
第三步：连词成句
1. Among various outdoor activities，going climbing with my friends is my favorite.
2. While climbing the mountain, I can appreciate the beauty of nature, talking and laughing with my friends.
3. It gives me a sense of freedom and relaxation, especially when I stand on top of the mountain.
4. It also strengthens my willpower.
5. So much does mountain climbing benefit me that I invite my friends to do it as long as we can spare time.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的非谓语动词，如：climbing mountains regularly keeps me fit both mentally and physically.这句话climbing mountains regularly是动名词短语作主语。另外还运用了主从复合句，如：So much does mountain climbing benefit me that I invite my friends to do it as long as we can spare time.这句话运用了so…that 结果状语从句，
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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