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假定你是李华,你和你的英国笔友Peter都对中文诗词很感兴趣,他目前正在参加 “全英中文诗词大赛”,并成功晋级决赛。他写信告知你这个好消息,希望得到你的帮助。请你用英语给 他写一封电子邮件。

英语试题 09-20

【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter回信,向他表示祝贺并表示愿意在诗词和比赛方面给他一定的帮助。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总 
要求:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 表明愿意提供帮助;
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be glad to do sth./ be devoted to/ be interested in/ be proud to do sth./ pay off/ be free to do sth./ be delighted to do sth./ offer sb. sth.
第三步:连词成句
1.Hearing that you've entered the final round in the Chinese Poetry Competition, I felt extremely excited!
2.It came as no surprise to me because I know you are obsessed with Chinese poetry, and you've been devoted to learning it for years.
3.I'm proud to see all your efforts have paid off.
4.If you need any help, feel free to let me know.
5.I'm delighted to offer you any kind of assistance and enjoy the pleasure of learning Chinese poetry with you.
6.Wish you greater success in the competition and in the study of Chinese poetry.
 
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:On hearing that you’ve entered the final round in the Chinese Poetry Competition, I felt extremely excited!中that引导宾语从句。
 
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