The rest of Elias' story You cannot imagine what the name of Robben Island made us afraid.
英语试题 03-14
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
The rest of Elias' story
You cannot imagine what the name of Robben Island made us afraid. It was a prison from where no one escaped. There I spent the hardest time of my life. But when I get there Nelson Mandela was also there and he helped me. Mr. Mandela began a school for those of us who had few learning. He taught us during the lunch breaks and the evening when we should have been asleep. We read books under our blankets and used anything we could find make candles to see the words. I became a good student. I wanted to study for my degree and I was not allowed to do that. Later, Mr. Mandela allowed the prison guards to join in us. He said they should not be stopped from studying for their degrees. They were not clever than me, but they did pass their exams. So I knew I could get a degree too. That made me feel good about me.
【答案】 ①what →how ②where →which ③get →got ④few →little ⑤evening →evenings ⑥find 后加to ⑦and →but ⑧去掉in ⑨clever → cleverer ⑩最后一句第二个me→ myself
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
The rest of Elias' story
You cannot imagine what the name of Robben Island made us afraid. It was a prison from where no one escaped. There I spent the hardest time of my life. But when I get there Nelson Mandela was also there and he helped me. Mr. Mandela began a school for those of us who had few learning. He taught us during the lunch breaks and the evening when we should have been asleep. We read books under our blankets and used anything we could find make candles to see the words. I became a good student. I wanted to study for my degree and I was not allowed to do that. Later, Mr. Mandela allowed the prison guards to join in us. He said they should not be stopped from studying for their degrees. They were not clever than me, but they did pass their exams. So I knew I could get a degree too. That made me feel good about me.
【答案】 ①what →how ②where →which ③get →got ④few →little ⑤evening →evenings ⑥find 后加to ⑦and →but ⑧去掉in ⑨clever → cleverer ⑩最后一句第二个me→ myself