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书面表达 有梦想就有目标,有希冀才会奋斗。无论国家、社会还是个人,梦想都是保持生机、激发活力的源泉。2018年12月31日国家主席习近平发表的二〇一九年新年贺词中提到

英语作文范文 02-18
书面表达
有梦想就有目标,有希冀才会奋斗。无论国家、社会还是个人,梦想都是保持生机、激发活力的源泉。2018年12月31日国家主席习近平发表的二〇一九年新年贺词中提到“我们都在努力奔跑,我们都是追梦人”。最近,你班就“我们的梦想”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总,请根据所给要点写一篇80词左右的英语短文,向英语校刊投稿:
1. Philip,想当音乐家,很有音乐天赋,曾经创作了具有地方特色音乐并获奖;
2. Anita,比起做导演更想当演员,她在校戏剧社担任主角,2018年首次亮相荧屏;
3.Tom, 想去亚洲其他国家旅游,比如世界第二人口大国印度,印度以IT业而闻名;
4.你,擅长破案解谜,梦想成为一名侦探, 查明一切真相;
5.为了实现梦想,你认为……。
注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.短文须包括以上内容要点,语句通顺、意思连贯。
3.第5点须展开合理想象,发挥1-2句。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas_______________________________________________________________
                                                                              
范文】Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
Philip has a  musical talent. He used to create music with local characteristics and won awards, so he wanted to be a musician.
Anita would rather be an actor than a director. She starred in the school drama club and made her screen debut in 2018.
Tom wants to travel to other Asian countries, such as India, the world's second most populous country, which is famous for its IT industry.
As for me, I'm good at solving puzzles. So, I dream to be a detective and find out all the truth.
In order to realize our dream, I think we must study hard now and lay a good foundation of knowledge.
【解析】
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如hold a discussion,talk about,a lot of,used to,would rather…than,such as,be famous for,as for me,be good at,dream to be,find out,in order to等。而复杂并列结构She starred in the school drama club and made her screen debut in 2018.和He used to create music with local characteristics and won awards, so he wanted to be a musician./ Tom wants to travel to other Asian countries, such as India, the world's second most populous country, which is famous for its IT industry. / In order to realize our dream, I think we must study hard now and lay a good foundation of knowledge.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。



 
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