读后续写 I woke up earlier than my brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got
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读后续写
I woke up earlier than my brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying good bye to my mother, I got in the car no later than 7:05. I got to school on time, even though my brother came out of the house late as he used to.
It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry rooms when my phone in my left pocket vibrated (震动). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my father’s name on that screen I realized something was not right.
He would not call me in the middle of a school day just to talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the phone, and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible, walk with him to the school picking-up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver would take us back home where my father was.
When I was in the car with my brother, my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going to meet him and my mum there. As soon as my brother and I found about the change in plans, we looked at each other in the eyes. I immediately noticed the fear in my brother’s eyes.
To be honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I did not say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my dad on the phone waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried. I had never seen him smoke before. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the white car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother; he was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry.
注意：1. 续写短文的词数150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The car stopped right in front of my dad.
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Paragraph 2:
We walked down the hall with our eyes closed.
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【范文】The car stopped right in front of my dad. He opened the door and I jumped out of the car and hugged him. He noticed that I was worried right away. With a smile on his face, he told us he had a surprise for us. What good things happen in hospital? When we approached the ward, my dad told my brother and me to close our eyes and hold his hands. So we did. His warm hands made us feel more secure.
We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. Suddenly we stopped. When we walked into the room, dad told us to open our eyes. We saw our mother lying on the bed. Tears welled up in my eyes, but I was not in pain. Right next to my mother was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a girl. She was sleeping. She was my sister. I still remember that day as one of the happiest days of my life. (149 words)
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章叙述了我和弟弟突然被爸爸接到医院去见妈妈的一件事。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：“汽车就停在我爸爸面前。”所以应该写：父亲见到我们后，我们的表现，及父亲对我们的安慰。
第二段开头是：“我们闭着眼睛走在大厅里。”所以应该写：父亲是为了给我们一个惊喜，让我们闭着眼睛，描述让我们觉得惊喜的事情。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：in front of；jump out of；walked into等高级词汇。When we walked into the room, dad told us to open our eyes.是when引导的时间状语从句。
I woke up earlier than my brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying good bye to my mother, I got in the car no later than 7:05. I got to school on time, even though my brother came out of the house late as he used to.
It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry rooms when my phone in my left pocket vibrated (震动). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my father’s name on that screen I realized something was not right.
He would not call me in the middle of a school day just to talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the phone, and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible, walk with him to the school picking-up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver would take us back home where my father was.
When I was in the car with my brother, my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going to meet him and my mum there. As soon as my brother and I found about the change in plans, we looked at each other in the eyes. I immediately noticed the fear in my brother’s eyes.
To be honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I did not say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my dad on the phone waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried. I had never seen him smoke before. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the white car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother; he was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry.
注意：1. 续写短文的词数150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The car stopped right in front of my dad.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
We walked down the hall with our eyes closed.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】The car stopped right in front of my dad. He opened the door and I jumped out of the car and hugged him. He noticed that I was worried right away. With a smile on his face, he told us he had a surprise for us. What good things happen in hospital? When we approached the ward, my dad told my brother and me to close our eyes and hold his hands. So we did. His warm hands made us feel more secure.
We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. Suddenly we stopped. When we walked into the room, dad told us to open our eyes. We saw our mother lying on the bed. Tears welled up in my eyes, but I was not in pain. Right next to my mother was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a girl. She was sleeping. She was my sister. I still remember that day as one of the happiest days of my life. (149 words)
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章叙述了我和弟弟突然被爸爸接到医院去见妈妈的一件事。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：“汽车就停在我爸爸面前。”所以应该写：父亲见到我们后，我们的表现，及父亲对我们的安慰。
第二段开头是：“我们闭着眼睛走在大厅里。”所以应该写：父亲是为了给我们一个惊喜，让我们闭着眼睛，描述让我们觉得惊喜的事情。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：in front of；jump out of；walked into等高级词汇。When we walked into the room, dad told us to open our eyes.是when引导的时间状语从句。
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