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假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友James来信询问你市即将举办的中国民谣节(the Chinese Balled Festival)的情况，请给他回信。
内容包括：
1.举办的时间和地点；
2.活动内容和目的；
3.邀请James 一同前往。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】Dear James,
I'm really glad to tell you something about the Chinese Ballad Festival which is to be held in our city.
The festival will be held from 8:00 pm to 10:00 pm this Sunday at the Peopled Art Theatre downtown. In order to promote Chinese folk culture, some famous Chinese ballad masters will give us eight excellent ballad shows, many of which will be on the stage for the first time. What is the most important expectation of the festival is an interactive activity between the audience and performers. I think the evening will be a feast for ballad lovers who are bound to enjoy themselves.
So I'd like to invite you to enjoy the ballad feast together. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友James来信询问你市即将举办的中国民谣节(the Chinese Balled Festival)的情况，请给他回信。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.举办的时间和地点；2.活动内容和目的；3.邀请James 一同前往。
写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇、短语和句子有：be to do in our city， The festival will be held from… to … in/at …，in order to ， for the first time， an interactive activity ， a feast for ，be bound to ， invite you to enjoy …， look forward to。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m really glad to tell you something about the Chinese Ballad Festival which is to be held in our city. In order to promote Chinese folk culture, some famous Chinese ballad masters will give us eight excellent ballad shows, many of which will be on the stage for the first time.这两句话运用了which引导的定语从句；I think the evening will be a feast for ballad lovers who are bound to enjoy themselves. 这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。
What is the most important expectation of the festival is an interactive activity between the audience and performers.这句话运用了what引导的主语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： in order to，be bound to ，look forward to。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友James来信询问你市即将举办的中国民谣节(the Chinese Balled Festival)的情况，请给他回信。
内容包括：
1.举办的时间和地点；
2.活动内容和目的；
3.邀请James 一同前往。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Dear James,
I'm really glad to tell you something about the Chinese Ballad Festival which is to be held in our city.
The festival will be held from 8:00 pm to 10:00 pm this Sunday at the Peopled Art Theatre downtown. In order to promote Chinese folk culture, some famous Chinese ballad masters will give us eight excellent ballad shows, many of which will be on the stage for the first time. What is the most important expectation of the festival is an interactive activity between the audience and performers. I think the evening will be a feast for ballad lovers who are bound to enjoy themselves.
So I'd like to invite you to enjoy the ballad feast together. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友James来信询问你市即将举办的中国民谣节(the Chinese Balled Festival)的情况，请给他回信。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.举办的时间和地点；2.活动内容和目的；3.邀请James 一同前往。
写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉
单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇、短语和句子有：be to do in our city， The festival will be held from… to … in/at …，in order to ， for the first time， an interactive activity ， a feast for ，be bound to ， invite you to enjoy …， look forward to。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I’m really glad to tell you something about the Chinese Ballad Festival which is to be held in our city. In order to promote Chinese folk culture, some famous Chinese ballad masters will give us eight excellent ballad shows, many of which will be on the stage for the first time.这两句话运用了which引导的定语从句；I think the evening will be a feast for ballad lovers who are bound to enjoy themselves. 这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。
What is the most important expectation of the festival is an interactive activity between the audience and performers.这句话运用了what引导的主语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如： in order to，be bound to ，look forward to。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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