书面表达 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。 1. 祝贺他获奖；
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假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest
Dear Michael,
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Michael,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest. As your friend,I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day. Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it. Your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach. You deserve to win this prize.
At last,I hope to have a talk with you as to exchanging our understanding towards learning Chinese poetry. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sincere congratulations(诚挚的祝贺)；the first prize(一等奖)；Chinese Poetry Contest(中国诗词大会)；delighted(高兴的)；show great interest in (对……表现出极大的兴趣)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.运用了宾语从句；Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it.运用了not only…but also结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest
Dear Michael,
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Michael,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest. As your friend,I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day. Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it. Your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach. You deserve to win this prize.
At last,I hope to have a talk with you as to exchanging our understanding towards learning Chinese poetry. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1. 祝贺他获奖；2. 肯定他付出的努力；3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sincere congratulations(诚挚的祝贺)；the first prize(一等奖)；Chinese Poetry Contest(中国诗词大会)；delighted(高兴的)；show great interest in (对……表现出极大的兴趣)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.运用了宾语从句；Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it.运用了not only…but also结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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