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假如你是李华,在某餐厅就餐时不满意餐厅的服务,请根据以下内容向餐厅经理写一封投诉信,内容如下: 1).投诉内容(没有保留预定位置,食物不新鲜,服务员态度不好等);

英语作文范文 02-28
假如你是李华,在某餐厅就餐时不满意餐厅的服务,请根据以下内容向餐厅经理写一封投诉信,内容如下:
1).投诉内容(没有保留预定位置,食物不新鲜,服务员态度不好等);
2).希望得到妥善处理。
注意:1).词数100左右;
2).可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam:
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文训练,要求考生以李华的身份向餐厅经理写一封投诉信,指出就餐时不满意餐厅的服务。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文。任务中给出的信息包含如下内容:1.投诉内容:没有保留预定位置,实物不新鲜, 态度不好等。2.希望得到妥善处理,抓住了要点,我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次,选用正确的人称和时态,考虑一般过去时,用第一人称来写。写出单个句子,使用正确的连词连句连句成段。写这篇文章时要注意:提示中的内容比较泛泛,要适当补充。分三自然段写,第一自然段说明自己写这封信的目的,第二自然段,叙述自己不愉快的就餐经历。第三自然段,希望餐厅经理解决这个问题, 杜绝此类时间再次发生。
范文
Dear Madam or Sir,
I'm Li Hua, a customer of your restaurant. I'm writing to you because of the unpleasant experience we had in your restaurant.
Last Friday I booked a table in near the window for dinner in your restaurant in advance because I was to treat my two American friends to a typical Chinese meal. But I was quite disappointed at your service. We went there at the time as arranged, only be told there were no seats available. What annoyed us most was that when we explained  to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely. Beside when we began our dinner, we found the food not fresh and some dishes were salty.
Thus it is my sincere hope that you can look into the case and take some measures to prevent such things happening again. I’d appreciate it . . you could give me a reasonable explanation as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本书面表达,要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如:I'm writing to you because of the unpleasant experience we had in your restaurant.运用了定语从句;We went there at the time as arranged, only be told there were no seats available.运用了不定式作结果状语和宾语从句;What annoyed us most was that when we explained  to the waitress, instead of helping us solve the problem, she shouted at us rudely.运用了主语从句、表语从句和时间状语从句。
 
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