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假设你是李华,你在上周搭坐102号公交车,该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很恼怒,于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信,要点如下:1. 司机不文明行为:大声讲话

英语作文范文 02-28
假设你是李华,你在上周搭坐102号公交车,该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很恼怒,于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信,要点如下:1. 司机不文明行为:大声讲话,紧急刹车,态度粗鲁等。2.希望尽快查清此事。
注意:1.词数100词左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
考查开放性作文,写作时开放性作文给出的一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局能力和组织要点能力。在完成开放式作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内选择句式时要注意变化,这样才可以更好的驾驭写作,同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
范文
Dear sir,
I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to complain about one of your business bus-driver’s improper and rude behaviors. Last Sunday I was taking the number 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man lovely but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn't pay attention. What's worse, he drove even faster. Some passengers couldn't bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn't apologize, but said rudely: “it's none of your business.”
I sincerely hope you can investigate these incidents and proper measures  should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again. 
【亮点点击】
范文中运用一些常见的短语,complain about抱怨,not only …but also不但……而且……,concentrate on集中精力……,Keep in mind记在心里……, what's worse, 更糟糕的是……,it's none of your business. 不关你的事。
 
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