假设你是李华。上个月你从国外网站订购了一件衬衫，一件外套和一条裤子，收到货后你发现衬衫不是你要的尺码，而且少了一粒纽扣，外套上有个小洞，裤子不是你要的颜色，请你给该网站客服写封投诉信。
英语作文范文 02-28
假设你是李华。上个月你从国外网站订购了一件衬衫，一件外套和一条裤子，收到货后你发现衬衫不是你要的尺码，而且少了一粒纽扣，外套上有个小洞，裤子不是你要的颜色，请你给该网站客服写封投诉信。内容包括：1.出现的问题；2，你希望的解决方案 3.希望能尽快得到回复。
注意： 1.100词左右，开头，结尾已经给出，但计入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。参考词汇：button纽扣 order定货，定单 refund退款
Dear manager,
I’m writing to you for the camera I bought last month while I was travelling in your country.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours
Li Tao
【写作指导】
本文要求给网店客服写封投诉信，内容包括：1.出现的问题；2，你希望的解决方案 3.希望能尽快得到回复。应该用一般过去时说明出现的问题，一般现在时说明第二和第三方面的内容；人称应该以第一人称为主，写作时注意增加细节，使衔接合理；还要尽量用高中阶段学习的词汇和句型，注意长短搭配和高级词汇句型的应用。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. In addition, when I tried out on the coat, I noticed that it had a hole in it. What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either.
On the whole, I'm not satisfied with your goods, I would like you to either change the order or give me a full refund.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本文结构明确，思路清晰，把内容要点都涵盖了，同时注意应用了较高级的短语和句子，对文章增设不少。比如：I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. 运用了定语从句；唉，Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. 运用了时间状语从句和宾语从句；What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either. 运用了表语从句。文章还注意了句子的变化和衔接，如In addition, what's worse ，on the whole等。
注意： 1.100词左右，开头，结尾已经给出，但计入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。参考词汇：button纽扣 order定货，定单 refund退款
Dear manager,
I’m writing to you for the camera I bought last month while I was travelling in your country.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours
Li Tao
【写作指导】
本文要求给网店客服写封投诉信，内容包括：1.出现的问题；2，你希望的解决方案 3.希望能尽快得到回复。应该用一般过去时说明出现的问题，一般现在时说明第二和第三方面的内容；人称应该以第一人称为主，写作时注意增加细节，使衔接合理；还要尽量用高中阶段学习的词汇和句型，注意长短搭配和高级词汇句型的应用。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. In addition, when I tried out on the coat, I noticed that it had a hole in it. What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either.
On the whole, I'm not satisfied with your goods, I would like you to either change the order or give me a full refund.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本文结构明确，思路清晰，把内容要点都涵盖了，同时注意应用了较高级的短语和句子，对文章增设不少。比如：I'm writing to make a complaint about a shirt, a coat and a pair of trousers which I bought from your online shop last month. 运用了定语从句；唉，Unfortunately, when the order arrived I realized that the shirt had a button missing and was not the size I had ordered. 运用了时间状语从句和宾语从句；What's worse, the color of the trousers was not what I had asked for either. 运用了表语从句。文章还注意了句子的变化和衔接，如In addition, what's worse ，on the whole等。
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