假如你是李华，你的好友你的好友鼓励，今年被评为“新疆最美少年”，你为他感到骄傲，并给她写一封祝贺信。要点如下：1.表达你诚挚的祝贺；2. 简要描述鼓励的先进事迹，如乐于助人、孝敬父母，品质兼优等。3.表达你要向鼓励学习的意愿和美好祝福。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that ______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇邮件类作文。本文要求考生一李华的名义给好友古丽写一封祝贺信，祝贺她今年被评为“新疆最美少年”，考生在成文时候应注意：合理发挥想象力，使得文章的表达自然丰满，文章的写作要点要齐全。要点包括：1.表达你诚挚的祝贺；2. 简要描述鼓励的先进事迹，如乐于助人、孝敬父母，品质兼优等。3.表达你要向鼓励学习的意愿和美好祝福。注意：文章的人称以第一人称为主；时态应为一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇be chosen as, sincere congratulation on, extraordinary, insist on和高级句型，以提高文章档次；恰当使用连接词meanwhile, therefore等，使得文章表达自然、流畅。还要注意在规定词数范围。
【范文】
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently. I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on your success! You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.
You are such an extraordinary example for us. You are often seen helping those in trouble or in need. At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint. Meanwhile, you are always among the top students at school. Therefore, it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.
Your success has greatly encouraged me and I hope that you will achieve further success in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.宾语从句；
it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.主语从句。At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint.非谓语动词做状语。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that ______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇邮件类作文。本文要求考生一李华的名义给好友古丽写一封祝贺信，祝贺她今年被评为“新疆最美少年”，考生在成文时候应注意：合理发挥想象力，使得文章的表达自然丰满，文章的写作要点要齐全。要点包括：1.表达你诚挚的祝贺；2. 简要描述鼓励的先进事迹，如乐于助人、孝敬父母，品质兼优等。3.表达你要向鼓励学习的意愿和美好祝福。注意：文章的人称以第一人称为主；时态应为一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇be chosen as, sincere congratulation on, extraordinary, insist on和高级句型，以提高文章档次；恰当使用连接词meanwhile, therefore等，使得文章表达自然、流畅。还要注意在规定词数范围。
【范文】
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently. I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on your success! You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.
You are such an extraordinary example for us. You are often seen helping those in trouble or in need. At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint. Meanwhile, you are always among the top students at school. Therefore, it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.
Your success has greatly encouraged me and I hope that you will achieve further success in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.宾语从句；
it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.主语从句。At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint.非谓语动词做状语。
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