假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。
英语作文范文 02-28
假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。同时要把所提出的要点写全，语句通顺，同时要准确运用时态、语态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理利用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增添色彩。
【范文】
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
As your best friend, I'm proud of you, your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, left me a deep impression. I hope that I can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be a great help to me in my learning. I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice. Look forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.使用宾语从句和并列句；I hope that I can be successful like you one day.句子中使用宾语从句；So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? 在句子中使用了宾语从句 ；I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice.固定句式的使用为文章增添色彩；另外一些高级词汇、短语be proud of、especially、left me a deep impression、 share with、 be of great help、 look forward to等的使用，也是文中亮点。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
假定你是李华，你的好友David在中学生英语歌咏比赛中获得一等奖，请你根据以下内容给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：一向他表示祝贺；二向他介绍成功的经验；三希望有一天能像他一样成功。写作时不要逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节使行文连贯。同时要把所提出的要点写全，语句通顺，同时要准确运用时态、语态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理利用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增添色彩。
【范文】
Dear David,
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
As your best friend, I'm proud of you, your pronunciation and fluent English, especially your beautiful voice, left me a deep impression. I hope that I can be successful like you one day. So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be a great help to me in my learning. I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice. Look forward to you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
I hear you have won first prize in the English Singing Contest of Middle School Students, so I am writing to be called congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.使用宾语从句和并列句；I hope that I can be successful like you one day.句子中使用宾语从句；So could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? 在句子中使用了宾语从句 ；I will appreciate it if you can run me back and give me your advice.固定句式的使用为文章增添色彩；另外一些高级词汇、短语be proud of、especially、left me a deep impression、 share with、 be of great help、 look forward to等的使用，也是文中亮点。
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