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假定你是李华。下学期你的表妹Jane将进入重点高中学习,她对高中生活学习充满了期待。请给Jane写一封邮件,内容包括: 1)祝贺她将进入重点高中学习

英语作文范文 02-28
假定你是李华。下学期你的表妹Jane将进入重点高中学习,她对高中生活学习充满了期待。请给Jane写一封邮件,内容包括:
1)祝贺她将进入重点高中学
2)建议她了解高中生活学习的特点,例如校园生活丰富多彩;课程内容的不同设置……
3)再次表示祝贺,提出美好祝愿。
注意:1)词数80左右
2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给Jane写一封邮件。写作背景:下学期你的表妹Jane将进入重点高中学习,他对高中学习充满了期待。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文。内容包括:一祝贺他进入重点高中学习,二建议她了解高中学习生活的特点,如园生活丰富多彩;课程的内容不同设置,三再次表示祝贺,提出美好祝愿。写作时注意运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,并且同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型词汇, 使文章显得更有档次,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
范文】 
Dear Jane,
 Congratulations!So excited am I to hear the wonderful news when your admission to a key senior school. This must be a moment of hope and pride. Fully understanding your eagerness for the life in high school, I have some tips that may help.
The life in high school quite differs. Not only is it to be splendid with its various activities and diverse courses, but it is also more intense and fast-paced. So it is better to prepare yourself in advance, or you may easily feel overwhelmed and lost.
Show my congratulations again and many wishes for your my life ahead .
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本篇作文要点齐全,结合完整条理清晰应用的吊灯的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好的完成了写作任务。例如:So excited am I to hear the wonderful news when your admission to a key senior school. 运用了倒装句式;Not only is it to be splendid with its various activities and diverse courses, but it is also more intense and fast-paced. 运用了not only…but also; So it is better to prepare yourself in advance, or you may easily feel overwhelmed and lost. 运用了形式主语;Show my congratulations again and many wishes for your my life ahead. 运用了祈使句等。
 
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