书面表达
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 申请条件（性格爱好英语能力等）；
3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）；
4. 希望获准。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet. I would like to work for you as a volunteer. The reasons can be listed as follows.
First, I like animals and I know a lot about wild animals by reading books and watching videos. Besides, I’m easy-going and I can get along with others easily. What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely. My purpose is to make more people realize the importance of protecting wild animals. Only in this way can we protect the animals better. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 自我介绍；2. 申请条件(性格爱好英语能力等)；3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）；4. 希望获准。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有： read the announcement，as a volunteer，reasons，as follows，know a lot about，easy-going，get along with，speak fluent English，so that，communicate with，realize the importance of protecting wild animals，take my application into consideration，look forward to，Only in this way can we protect the animals better.可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句；What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely.这句话运用了so that引导的目的状语从句；使用了倒装句：Only in this way can we protect the animals better.使用了一些固定词组，如：as follows，get along with，application into consideration，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。内容主要包括：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 申请条件（性格爱好英语能力等）；
3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）；
4. 希望获准。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet. I would like to work for you as a volunteer. The reasons can be listed as follows.
First, I like animals and I know a lot about wild animals by reading books and watching videos. Besides, I’m easy-going and I can get along with others easily. What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely. My purpose is to make more people realize the importance of protecting wild animals. Only in this way can we protect the animals better. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，从互联网上得知某国外野生动物保护组织正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员，请写一封电子邮件申请加入。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 自我介绍；2. 申请条件(性格爱好英语能力等)；3. 参加意图（宣传保护动物的重要性）；4. 希望获准。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有： read the announcement，as a volunteer，reasons，as follows，know a lot about，easy-going，get along with，speak fluent English，so that，communicate with，realize the importance of protecting wild animals，take my application into consideration，look forward to，Only in this way can we protect the animals better.可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I have read the announcement that you posted on the Internet.这句话运用了that引导的定语从句；What’s more, I can speak fluent English so that I can communicate with others freely.这句话运用了so that引导的目的状语从句；使用了倒装句：Only in this way can we protect the animals better.使用了一些固定词组，如：as follows，get along with，application into consideration，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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