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假如上周末你和班上的同学去海边沙滩上玩。根据提示写一篇短文，字数80词。
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【范文】Last Saturday, I went to a beach of a beautiful sea with my classmates. We met at 8:00 at the school gate. It took us about one hour to get there by bus. On the way to the beach, we talked something interesting about our famous stars. As soon as we got there, we immediately ran to the beach and swam for a while in the near sea. We took plenty of nice photos there. Meanwhile, we played beach volleyball and beach games. How exciting the games are! In the evening, we had a beach party and had lots of delicious seafood. We got back home at around 7:00p.m. Although we were a bit tired, we really had a great time!
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于记叙文。写作时要注意根据题目材料描述一天的历程。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式，按照时间顺序，结构清晰。用第一人称进行记叙；时态采用一般过去时。结尾有说明游玩的感受。
3.高分亮点：
短语：on the way to，as soon as，for a while，plenty of，get back，a bit，have a great time。
句型：how引导的感叹句，although引导的转折句。
假如上周末你和班上的同学去海边沙滩上玩。根据提示写一篇短文，字数80词。
| 集合：周六早上8：00，校门口（gate） 路程：公共汽车约1小时 活动：1. 沿途所见所闻所做（聊天等）；2. 拍照；3. 打沙滩排球、游泳…；4. …… 感受：…… |
【范文】Last Saturday, I went to a beach of a beautiful sea with my classmates. We met at 8:00 at the school gate. It took us about one hour to get there by bus. On the way to the beach, we talked something interesting about our famous stars. As soon as we got there, we immediately ran to the beach and swam for a while in the near sea. We took plenty of nice photos there. Meanwhile, we played beach volleyball and beach games. How exciting the games are! In the evening, we had a beach party and had lots of delicious seafood. We got back home at around 7:00p.m. Although we were a bit tired, we really had a great time!
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于记叙文。写作时要注意根据题目材料描述一天的历程。
2.例文点评：例文采用一段式，按照时间顺序，结构清晰。用第一人称进行记叙；时态采用一般过去时。结尾有说明游玩的感受。
3.高分亮点：
短语：on the way to，as soon as，for a while，plenty of，get back，a bit，have a great time。
句型：how引导的感叹句，although引导的转折句。
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