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书面表达 假定你是李华,得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会(World Middle School Games) 将在中国福建晋江举行,

英语作文范文 03-13
书面表达
假定你是李华,得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会(World Middle School Games) 将在中国福建晋江举行,组委会正面向全国招募志愿者。请写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 申请理由; 2. 自身优势;  3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that you are recruiting volunteers for the 18th World Middle School Games in 2020, I am writing to apply for this position.
As a super fan of sports, I am eager to expose myself to various sports-related activities. World Middle School Games is such a golden opportunity to meet the outstanding teenagers worldwide that I really don’t want to miss it. In addition, the voluntary service will offer me a precious chance to contribute to our society.
I believe I am a qualified candidate. A good command of English ensures that I can communicate with the foreign athletes effectively. Moreover, with my love and knowledge for sports as well as Chinese history and culture, I can fulfill my role not only as a volunteer, but also as a cultural ambassador to spread the splendid Chinese culture.
I would be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封申请信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封申请信:假定你是李华,得知2020年第18届世界中学生运动会将在中国福建晋江举行,组委会正面向全国招募志愿者。请写一封申请信,内容包括:1. 申请理由; 2. 自身优势;  3. 表达期待。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; World Middle School Games(世界中学生运动会),position(职位),recruit(招募),various(多方面的),splendid(灿烂的), outstanding(杰出的),worldwide(全世界的),voluntary service(志愿服务),cultural ambassador(文化使节)及qualified(合格的)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有apply for(申请),be eager to do(渴望……),expose oneself to (暴露于、接触),offer sb sth(为某人提供某物),contribute to(为……做贡献)以及a good command of(精通、熟练掌握),而且还使用了宾语从句“I believe I am a qualified candidate.”及“A good command of English ensures that I can communicate with the foreign athletes effectively.”,状语从句“I would be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. ”,非谓语动词“Learning that you are recruiting volunteers for the 18th World Middle School Games in 2020, I am writing to apply for this position.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
 
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