概要写作（满分 25 分）
With the development of our society, cellphones have become a common part in our lives. Have you ever run into a careless cellphone user on the street? Maybe they were busy talking, texting or checking updates on WeChat without looking at what looking at what was going on around them. As the number of this new “species” of humans keeps rising, they have been given a new name-phubbers.
Recently a cartoon created by students from China Central Academy of Fine Arts put this group of people under the spotlight. In the short film, phubbers with various social identities (身份) bury themselves in their phones. A doctor plays with his cell phone while letting his patient die, a pretty woman takes a selfie (自拍) in front of a car accident site, and a father loses his child without knowing about it while using his mobile phone. A chain of similar events finally leads to the destruction of the world.
Although the ending of the film sounds unrealistic, the damage phubbing can bring is real. Your health is the first to bear the effect and result of it. “Always bending your head to check your cell phone could damage your neck,” Guangming Daily quoted doctors’ words. “The neck is like a rope that breaks after long-term stretching.” Also, staring at cell phones for a long time will damage your eyesight gradually, according to the report.
But that’s not all. Being a phubber could also damage your social skills and drive you away from your friends and family. When getting together with family or friends, many people prefer to play their cell phones while others are chatting happily with each other and this creates a strange atmosphere, Qilu Evening News reported.
It can also cost your life. There have been lots of reports on phubbers who fell to their death, suffered accidents, and were robbed of their cell phones in broad daylight.
答案
The advancement/development of modern society leads to a rising group of phubbers, who are addicted to the cellphones. A recent cartoon film brings them to public attention. Absurd/Unrealistic though the ending of the film may seem, being absorbed in cellphones does ruin your health like your neck and eyesight. Besides, your social skills will be weakened too, distancing you from your friends and family. Worse still, being a phubber may put your own life at risk.
With the development of our society, cellphones have become a common part in our lives. Have you ever run into a careless cellphone user on the street? Maybe they were busy talking, texting or checking updates on WeChat without looking at what looking at what was going on around them. As the number of this new “species” of humans keeps rising, they have been given a new name-phubbers.
Recently a cartoon created by students from China Central Academy of Fine Arts put this group of people under the spotlight. In the short film, phubbers with various social identities (身份) bury themselves in their phones. A doctor plays with his cell phone while letting his patient die, a pretty woman takes a selfie (自拍) in front of a car accident site, and a father loses his child without knowing about it while using his mobile phone. A chain of similar events finally leads to the destruction of the world.
Although the ending of the film sounds unrealistic, the damage phubbing can bring is real. Your health is the first to bear the effect and result of it. “Always bending your head to check your cell phone could damage your neck,” Guangming Daily quoted doctors’ words. “The neck is like a rope that breaks after long-term stretching.” Also, staring at cell phones for a long time will damage your eyesight gradually, according to the report.
But that’s not all. Being a phubber could also damage your social skills and drive you away from your friends and family. When getting together with family or friends, many people prefer to play their cell phones while others are chatting happily with each other and this creates a strange atmosphere, Qilu Evening News reported.
It can also cost your life. There have been lots of reports on phubbers who fell to their death, suffered accidents, and were robbed of their cell phones in broad daylight.
答案
The advancement/development of modern society leads to a rising group of phubbers, who are addicted to the cellphones. A recent cartoon film brings them to public attention. Absurd/Unrealistic though the ending of the film may seem, being absorbed in cellphones does ruin your health like your neck and eyesight. Besides, your social skills will be weakened too, distancing you from your friends and family. Worse still, being a phubber may put your own life at risk.
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