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书面表达。假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter对中国春联 (Spring Festival couplets)

英语作文范文 04-17
书面表达(满分25)
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter对中国春联 (Spring Festival couplets)产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国的春联文化。请你回信为他介绍春联的用途、内容和寓意等。
注意:1、词数100左右。2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
 
 
 
范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know you have interest in Spring Festival couplets. Now, let me introduce some details of them to you.
As a symbol of Chinese traditional culture, Spring Festival couplets are always stuck on the door or the wall of a house. They are necessities for Chinese people to celebrate the Spring Festival. Written with a writing brush on red paper, Spring Festival couplets use some positive words showing wishes for love, health, success, wealth, happiness and so on. They always have a theme, and they represent better life or successful future, and some of them include wishes and expectations. Of course, the topic of singing the praises of our motherland is another good choice.
Hope you find my introduction useful.
Yours,
1.i Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达是要求学生写一封书信,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,因为是向外国朋友介绍春联文化,故整个习作所运用的时态是一般现在时。所要注意重点介绍春联的用途、内容和寓意等,再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如be glad to,and so on,of course,等。另外Written with a writing brush on red paper, Spring Festival couplets use some positive words showing wishes for love, health, success, wealth, happiness and so on..这句运用了过去分词作状语和现在分词作定语等等。并注意了句子的衔接等等。
 
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