书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom发邮件询问你的职业规划。请你回复邮件, 内容包括：
1. 你的职业规划；
2. 选择该职业的原因；
3. 询问对方的意见。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receiver your e-mail asking about my future plan. Here I want to share it with you.
What I have been longing for is to study traditional Chinese medicine, which is a cultural treasure of the nation. However, it’s this year’s epidemic that strengthens my resolve to become a doctor. Since the epidemic swept over China, numerous doctors have been saving and protecting lives around the clock despite the risk of infection and exhaustion from overwork. They are hailed as “heroes in harm’s way”. I do hope to be one of them in the future to shoulder the responsibility.
So, how do you think of my plan? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向你的英国朋友Tom讲述一下你的职业规划。
【详解】本文要求写一封电子邮件。需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体：1. 你的职业规划；2. 选择该职业的原因；3. 询问对方的意见。需要准确表达，也不能遗漏。写作时注意准确运用时态，本文应该用一般现在时态。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要也注意书写。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了主语从句What I have been longing for is to study traditional Chinese medicine,和定语从句which is a cultural treasure of the nation.在一个句中。这样的高级句式，提高了文章整体的档次。还有在I do hope to be one of them in the future to shoulder the responsibility.中使用了助动词do加强了语气，提高了文章整体的语言色彩，也体现了句式的变化。
假如你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Tom发邮件询问你的职业规划。请你回复邮件, 内容包括：
1. 你的职业规划；
2. 选择该职业的原因；
3. 询问对方的意见。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receiver your e-mail asking about my future plan. Here I want to share it with you.
What I have been longing for is to study traditional Chinese medicine, which is a cultural treasure of the nation. However, it’s this year’s epidemic that strengthens my resolve to become a doctor. Since the epidemic swept over China, numerous doctors have been saving and protecting lives around the clock despite the risk of infection and exhaustion from overwork. They are hailed as “heroes in harm’s way”. I do hope to be one of them in the future to shoulder the responsibility.
So, how do you think of my plan? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向你的英国朋友Tom讲述一下你的职业规划。
【详解】本文要求写一封电子邮件。需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较具体：1. 你的职业规划；2. 选择该职业的原因；3. 询问对方的意见。需要准确表达，也不能遗漏。写作时注意准确运用时态，本文应该用一般现在时态。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要也注意书写。
【点睛】本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了主语从句What I have been longing for is to study traditional Chinese medicine,和定语从句which is a cultural treasure of the nation.在一个句中。这样的高级句式，提高了文章整体的档次。还有在I do hope to be one of them in the future to shoulder the responsibility.中使用了助动词do加强了语气，提高了文章整体的语言色彩，也体现了句式的变化。
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