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作文 初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,毕业之际,你是否有想要感恩的人或事呢?

英语作文范文 04-20
作文
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,毕业之际,你是否有想要感恩的人或事呢?请根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点 :1)你想要感恩的人或者事是什么;
2)感恩的理由是什么;
3)你的感受。
2.要求: 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数 100  左右。
                                                                                                                                                
范文】例文
How time flies! I will graduate soon. Now I have many words from my heart to say. First I want to say thanks to my parents. They have taken good care of me in the past three years. When I was in trouble, they used to encourage me and cheer me up. They taught me how to get on well with my classmates. Then I want to thank my teachers for teaching me so well. I won’t forget how interesting their classes are and how friendly they are. At last, I want to thank my classmates for helping me a lot with my study.
 I will never forget the days when we stay together.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文。题目要求考生根据提示和要求,描述在毕业之际想要感谢的人或事,并说明原因及感受。
2.例文点评:例文要点齐全,拓展合理,句式丰富,并适当使用first,then,at last等词,使上下文联系紧密,表达具有条理性。
3.高分亮点:
短语:
take good care of sb.,in the past three years,teach sb. how to do sth.,get on well with sb.,help sb. with sth.。
句型:
How time flies!
When I was in trouble, they used to encourage me and cheer me up.
I won’t forget how interesting their classes are and how friendly they are.
I will never forget the days when we stay together.
 
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