书面表达（满分 25 分）
学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知 欢迎大家积极参与。
目的 增长环保知识；提高英语口语 主题 “保护环境，节约能源”
比赛时间 6 月 5 日星期五 4：00-5：30
报名时间 5 月 25 日前
报名方式 studentcenter@163.com
比赛地点 教学楼五楼演讲大厅
评奖 一等奖 3 名，二等奖 6 名，三等奖 12 名
Notice
Dear fellow students,
________________________________________
Students’ Union
【范文】Notice
To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.
The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th. Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.
Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
Students' Union
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一个书面通知，希望大家参加以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
目的：增长环保知识；提高英语口语
主题：“保护环境，节约能源”
比赛时间
报名时间和方式
比赛地点
评奖
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
increase/ improve/ in order to/ participate in/ be welcome to/ including/ be supposed to do sth./ plan to do sth./ sign up
第三步：连词成句
in order to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, whose theme is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.
The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th.
Those want to participate in the contest supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th.
Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.
Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.中不定式作目的状语，which引导非限制性定语从句；Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th.中who引导定语从句。
学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知 欢迎大家积极参与。
目的 增长环保知识；提高英语口语 主题 “保护环境，节约能源”
比赛时间 6 月 5 日星期五 4：00-5：30
报名时间 5 月 25 日前
报名方式 studentcenter@163.com
比赛地点 教学楼五楼演讲大厅
评奖 一等奖 3 名，二等奖 6 名，三等奖 12 名
Notice
Dear fellow students,
________________________________________
Students’ Union
【范文】Notice
To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.
The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th. Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.
Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
Students' Union
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生写一个书面通知，希望大家参加以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
目的：增长环保知识；提高英语口语
主题：“保护环境，节约能源”
比赛时间
报名时间和方式
比赛地点
评奖
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
increase/ improve/ in order to/ participate in/ be welcome to/ including/ be supposed to do sth./ plan to do sth./ sign up
第三步：连词成句
in order to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, whose theme is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.
The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th.
Those want to participate in the contest supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th.
Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones.
Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students' Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is ''Protect our environment and save our energy''.中不定式作目的状语，which引导非限制性定语从句；Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@ 163. com before May 25th.中who引导定语从句。
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