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假定你是李华，你和你的英国同学Mike约好本周五晚上去看电影，但是他刚发来电子邮件，说他下楼时扭伤了右脚，不能赴约。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 给出疗伤建议；
3. 祝早日康复，另约时间。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扭伤sprain
Dear Mike,
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs. It doesn’t matter that we can’t go to the cinema together this Friday evening. Take it easy. Here are some common first aid measures, which, I hope, will work for you.
You can sit down and put your right foot on a slightly higher place, then put an ice pack on the injury to reduce the swelling part. In addition, apply some medicine to the injury if you have some at hand. And then you’d better go to hospital.
Whenever you recover, let me know. I will be available any time next week. I wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给同学Mike写一封回信，对他受伤的事情表示安慰，并提出疗伤建议。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：分总
要求：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 给出疗伤建议；
3. 祝早日康复，另约时间。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be sorry to do sth./ take it easy/ reduce/ apply…to…/ at hand/ had better do sth./ in addition
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs, I feel worried.
2. It doesn’t matter that we can’t go to the cinema together this Friday evening.
3. Take it easy.
4. I know some common first aid measures, which perhaps will work for you.
5. You can sit down and put your right foot on a slightly higher place, then put an ice pack on the injury to reduce the swelling part.
6. In addition, apply some medicine to the injury if you have some at hand.
7. And then you’d better go to hospital if it gets worse.
8. When you recover, please let me know.
9. I will be available any time next week.
10. Wish you a speedy recovery.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I’m sorry to hear that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs.中that引导宾语从句；Here are some common first aid measures, which, I hope, will work for you.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Whenever you recover, let me know.中whenever引导让步状语从句。这些从句的使用，使文章色彩纷呈。
假定你是李华，你和你的英国同学Mike约好本周五晚上去看电影，但是他刚发来电子邮件，说他下楼时扭伤了右脚，不能赴约。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 给出疗伤建议；
3. 祝早日康复，另约时间。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扭伤sprain
Dear Mike,
______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs. It doesn’t matter that we can’t go to the cinema together this Friday evening. Take it easy. Here are some common first aid measures, which, I hope, will work for you.
You can sit down and put your right foot on a slightly higher place, then put an ice pack on the injury to reduce the swelling part. In addition, apply some medicine to the injury if you have some at hand. And then you’d better go to hospital.
Whenever you recover, let me know. I will be available any time next week. I wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给同学Mike写一封回信，对他受伤的事情表示安慰，并提出疗伤建议。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：分总
要求：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 给出疗伤建议；
3. 祝早日康复，另约时间。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be sorry to do sth./ take it easy/ reduce/ apply…to…/ at hand/ had better do sth./ in addition
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs, I feel worried.
2. It doesn’t matter that we can’t go to the cinema together this Friday evening.
3. Take it easy.
4. I know some common first aid measures, which perhaps will work for you.
5. You can sit down and put your right foot on a slightly higher place, then put an ice pack on the injury to reduce the swelling part.
6. In addition, apply some medicine to the injury if you have some at hand.
7. And then you’d better go to hospital if it gets worse.
8. When you recover, please let me know.
9. I will be available any time next week.
10. Wish you a speedy recovery.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I’m sorry to hear that you sprained your right ankle when going downstairs.中that引导宾语从句；Here are some common first aid measures, which, I hope, will work for you.中which引导非限制性定语从句；Whenever you recover, let me know.中whenever引导让步状语从句。这些从句的使用，使文章色彩纷呈。
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