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书面表达假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给交换生朋友Jim写一封邮件,

英语作文范文 05-07

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Jim写信,邀请他参加中国结社团,并给他介绍社团的大致情况。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构:总分
要求:
1.介绍社团相关内容(例如:时间、地点…);
2.说明你打算参加的原因;
3.询问对方的意向。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be interested in/ invite sb. to do sth./ introduce sth. to sb./ set up/ be aimed at/ have a better understanding of/ would like to do sth./join sb.
第三步:连词成句
How is everything going?
Knowing your strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to share some good news with you!
Our school will set up a wide range of clubs for us to choose from, of which the Chinese knot club is included.
Undoubtedly, as for me, I will definitely go for it
The club is scheduled to be open in Room 302 in our Science Building every Friday at 4:00 pm, when I suppose you will be free.
Would you like to come and join me?
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:I clearly remember you’ve mentioned your strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, so I’m writing to share some good news with you!中使用了宾语从句;The club is scheduled to be open in Room 302 in our Science Building every Friday at 4:00 pm, when I suppose you will be free.中when引导定语从句。
 
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