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这次新冠疫情，让我们意识到健康的重要性。请你写信给你的外国笔友Tom谈谈有关健康的问题。主要要点如下：
1. 保持健康的重要性
2. 保持健康的方法
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已经写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to discuss with you the matter of health.
_______________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I'm writing to discuss with you the matter of health. Health is far more important than wealth. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing.
How can we keep healthy？Here is some advice. Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat which is rich in sugar and fat. Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.
In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Tom写信通过这次新冠疫情谈谈有关健康的问题。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 保持健康的重要性
2. 保持健康的方法
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
a way to do sth./ enable sb. to do sth./ achieve/ on the contrary/ take exercise/ avoid doing sth./ keep a balanced life/ get rid of/ stick to/ lead a…life
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to share my opinions about the matter of health.
2. As far as I am concerned, health is far more important than wealth.
3. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.
4. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing.
5. How can we keep healthy？
6. My suggestions are as follows.
7. Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.
8. So we should avoid food rich in sugar and fat, such as fried chickens, chips and so on.
9. Secondly, we'd better take exercise every day to make our bodies strong.
10. Besides, we have to lead a balanced life to avoid too much pressure.
11. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.
12. In conclusion, by doing what are mentioned above, we will lead a healthy life.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.中what引导宾语从句；So we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat which is rich in sugar and fat.中which引导定语从句；In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.中if引导条件状语从句。
这次新冠疫情，让我们意识到健康的重要性。请你写信给你的外国笔友Tom谈谈有关健康的问题。主要要点如下：
1. 保持健康的重要性
2. 保持健康的方法
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已经写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to discuss with you the matter of health.
_______________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I'm writing to discuss with you the matter of health. Health is far more important than wealth. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing.
How can we keep healthy？Here is some advice. Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat which is rich in sugar and fat. Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.
In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Tom写信通过这次新冠疫情谈谈有关健康的问题。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 保持健康的重要性
2. 保持健康的方法
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
a way to do sth./ enable sb. to do sth./ achieve/ on the contrary/ take exercise/ avoid doing sth./ keep a balanced life/ get rid of/ stick to/ lead a…life
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to share my opinions about the matter of health.
2. As far as I am concerned, health is far more important than wealth.
3. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.
4. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing.
5. How can we keep healthy？
6. My suggestions are as follows.
7. Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.
8. So we should avoid food rich in sugar and fat, such as fried chickens, chips and so on.
9. Secondly, we'd better take exercise every day to make our bodies strong.
10. Besides, we have to lead a balanced life to avoid too much pressure.
11. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.
12. In conclusion, by doing what are mentioned above, we will lead a healthy life.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career.中what引导宾语从句；So we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat which is rich in sugar and fat.中which引导定语从句；In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.中if引导条件状语从句。
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