书面表达（满分20分）
最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫Laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most的短文。
内容要点：
1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，
2.是一位大学老师。
3.我成长的良师益友
4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。
注意:
开头已给出，不计入字数。
可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
词数100左右。
My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most
The woman whom I admire most is my mother.
The Woman I Admire Most
The woman whom I admire most is my mother. Not only is she my mother, but she’s my best friend. My mother was born and grew up in the countryside. The conditions there were very terrible when she was young, but she had a strong will and managed to get away from there. She managed to get a high education and now she’s an excellent college teacher.
My mother teaches me a lot and she also teaches me how to be a useful person. When I’m in trouble, she always helps me and encourages me to work hard. Being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me. She shows great respect towards her parents and loves everybody in the family.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫Laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most的短文。内容要点： 1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，2.是一位大学老师。3.我成长的良师益友 4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，这篇文章用一般现在时。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】The woman whom I admire most is my mother.包含一个定语从句。Being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me.这里是现在分词作状语。
考点：提纲类书面表达
最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫Laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most的短文。
内容要点：
1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，
2.是一位大学老师。
3.我成长的良师益友
4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。
注意:
开头已给出，不计入字数。
可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
词数100左右。
My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most
The woman whom I admire most is my mother.
The Woman I Admire Most
The woman whom I admire most is my mother. Not only is she my mother, but she’s my best friend. My mother was born and grew up in the countryside. The conditions there were very terrible when she was young, but she had a strong will and managed to get away from there. She managed to get a high education and now she’s an excellent college teacher.
My mother teaches me a lot and she also teaches me how to be a useful person. When I’m in trouble, she always helps me and encourages me to work hard. Being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me. She shows great respect towards her parents and loves everybody in the family.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。最近你校聘请了一名外籍教师,名叫Laura。校长安排她给你们上了一堂关于women heroes的课,课后她给你们布置了一个任务:写一篇题目为My Mother- A Woman I Admire Most的短文。内容要点： 1.母亲生在农村，受过高等教育，2.是一位大学老师。3.我成长的良师益友 4.母亲爱家里的每一个人。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，这篇文章用一般现在时。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】The woman whom I admire most is my mother.包含一个定语从句。Being a caring woman, my mother loves both my father and me.这里是现在分词作状语。
考点：提纲类书面表达
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