阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had she been so nervous before. This competition was of vital importance to her comeback .“If I can win today,” she said to herself, “I can dance on the national stage next month.” Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident.After the medical treatment , she began to recover slowly. She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.
“Hi, Mary,” in rushed her friend Jessica.“How is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”
“I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match . ” said Mary with a determined look.
“Admirable! But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong.She can be your real well-matched competitor.Come on!”
After Jessica left,Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin . “If I don’t try harder, I won’t grasp this chance.” She thought. But her arm began to hurt, making her worried. “Mary, what makes you think you have a chance tonight?” she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair.Then, she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully. Seeing Mary, she smiled politely and said “Hi, I’m Linda. I am the next one!” Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. “This is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight.” Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream, “Oh, God, I can’t find my music tape!” Linda searched her bag but in vain . “It may be missing on the way.”With these words, she then rushed out.
注意：
1.所续写短文的字数应为120字左右；
2.应使用5个以上的短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag._____________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.___________________________________________
【答案】读后续写范文1
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. She went over and then opened the box to find Linda’s tape was just inside. At that time, she was in a dilemma, “This is my chance to defeat her.” But on a second thought, she changed her mind, “If I hide it, I will will the competition but I may lose something.” She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note saying “Take it easy, we are the best.” Soon, it’s her turn to come on the stage.
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. She kept reminding herself, “I have been practicing for so long, and I will certainly make it.” But the serious pain in her arm came again when she was performing the most difficult spin. She fell down on the stage. At that moment, Linda came back in low spirits. To her surprise and relief she saw the tape and Mary’s note. With Mary’s kindness and encouragement, Linda finished her performance calmly and skillfully. Finally, Mary lost the game but she believed she had won everything.
读后续写范文2
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.She bent over to pick it up. “Linda’s music tape!” She cried out in surprise. “It must have rolled out of her bag,while she got changed here.” At this moment, an idea flashed through her mind, which made her rooted to the spot. “Without her music tape, Linda will surely lose; without this real competitor, I will definitely win.” At the thought of this, Mary shivered slightly. She was in a dilemma, wondering what to do next. “Do I really want to win so much?”She hesitated for a second and then hurried out to give the music tape to Linda ,who was extremely anxious in the corridor. Linda was so grateful to Mary, and finished her dancing successfully.
Hearing her name called Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. Nervous as she was, she stepped onto the stage with a big smile. She danced skillfully to the music and completed her most difficult spin smoothly. “Good,” she thougt to herself, “my injured arm is awesome today.” As the music ended, thunderous applause filled the stadium.With the final marks announced, Mary knew she achieved her goal and tears began to well up in her eyes . (Possible ending 1)As she headed back to the dressing room, Linda came up to her cheerfully and held her hand tightly, “Congratulations!You’ve done an amazing performance! You win!” Mary smiled happily, “I win.” (Possible ending 2)As she headed back to the dressing room, she thought about the music tape. “No one will know how close I really came to losing,” Mary said softly to herself.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文，文章主要讲述了负伤参加舞蹈比赛的Mary遇到了自己的竞争对手Linda，而Linda却出现了准备上的失误：录音带不见了。要求考生根据提示续写后文。
【详解】前文主要讲的是左手在车祸中受伤复原后的Mary要参加舞蹈比赛以赢得更大的舞台，比赛准备期间遇到了“劲敌”Linda。 Linda 却由于失误导致自己的录音带失。在给的第一段开头中，“Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.”“caught sight of”意思是“看到”，“a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag”此句中的a black box为关键词，应该指Linda的录音带。后文需要围绕这个词描述Mary的心理变化和应对：是及时还给她还是偷偷藏起来？在给的第二段开头中“Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.（听到叫她的名字，玛丽在舞台上走着，她的心跳越来越快。）”Mary 为关键词，后文要对她在舞台上的表现进行描述：伤痛影响发挥而失败还是克服伤痛获得胜利？
范文一第一段中描述了Mary的矛盾心路历程，最终决定将磁带归还并以鼓励：She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note saying “Take it easy, we are the best.”第二段描述了伤痛影响发挥导致比赛失败，但却有结论：Finally, Mary lost the game but she believed she had won everything.
范文二第一段中描述了Mary 的矛盾心理历程，但最终做出决定：She hesitated for a second and then hurried out to give the music tape to Linda. 第二段描述了克服伤痛获得比赛胜利：Mary smiled happily, “I win.”
Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had she been so nervous before. This competition was of vital importance to her comeback .“If I can win today,” she said to herself, “I can dance on the national stage next month.” Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident.After the medical treatment , she began to recover slowly. She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.
“Hi, Mary,” in rushed her friend Jessica.“How is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”
“I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match . ” said Mary with a determined look.
“Admirable! But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong.She can be your real well-matched competitor.Come on!”
After Jessica left,Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin . “If I don’t try harder, I won’t grasp this chance.” She thought. But her arm began to hurt, making her worried. “Mary, what makes you think you have a chance tonight?” she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair.Then, she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully. Seeing Mary, she smiled politely and said “Hi, I’m Linda. I am the next one!” Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. “This is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight.” Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream, “Oh, God, I can’t find my music tape!” Linda searched her bag but in vain . “It may be missing on the way.”With these words, she then rushed out.
注意：
1.所续写短文的字数应为120字左右；
2.应使用5个以上的短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag._____________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.___________________________________________
【答案】读后续写范文1
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. She went over and then opened the box to find Linda’s tape was just inside. At that time, she was in a dilemma, “This is my chance to defeat her.” But on a second thought, she changed her mind, “If I hide it, I will will the competition but I may lose something.” She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note saying “Take it easy, we are the best.” Soon, it’s her turn to come on the stage.
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. She kept reminding herself, “I have been practicing for so long, and I will certainly make it.” But the serious pain in her arm came again when she was performing the most difficult spin. She fell down on the stage. At that moment, Linda came back in low spirits. To her surprise and relief she saw the tape and Mary’s note. With Mary’s kindness and encouragement, Linda finished her performance calmly and skillfully. Finally, Mary lost the game but she believed she had won everything.
读后续写范文2
Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.She bent over to pick it up. “Linda’s music tape!” She cried out in surprise. “It must have rolled out of her bag,while she got changed here.” At this moment, an idea flashed through her mind, which made her rooted to the spot. “Without her music tape, Linda will surely lose; without this real competitor, I will definitely win.” At the thought of this, Mary shivered slightly. She was in a dilemma, wondering what to do next. “Do I really want to win so much?”She hesitated for a second and then hurried out to give the music tape to Linda ,who was extremely anxious in the corridor. Linda was so grateful to Mary, and finished her dancing successfully.
Hearing her name called Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. Nervous as she was, she stepped onto the stage with a big smile. She danced skillfully to the music and completed her most difficult spin smoothly. “Good,” she thougt to herself, “my injured arm is awesome today.” As the music ended, thunderous applause filled the stadium.With the final marks announced, Mary knew she achieved her goal and tears began to well up in her eyes . (Possible ending 1)As she headed back to the dressing room, Linda came up to her cheerfully and held her hand tightly, “Congratulations!You’ve done an amazing performance! You win!” Mary smiled happily, “I win.” (Possible ending 2)As she headed back to the dressing room, she thought about the music tape. “No one will know how close I really came to losing,” Mary said softly to herself.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文，文章主要讲述了负伤参加舞蹈比赛的Mary遇到了自己的竞争对手Linda，而Linda却出现了准备上的失误：录音带不见了。要求考生根据提示续写后文。
【详解】前文主要讲的是左手在车祸中受伤复原后的Mary要参加舞蹈比赛以赢得更大的舞台，比赛准备期间遇到了“劲敌”Linda。 Linda 却由于失误导致自己的录音带失。在给的第一段开头中，“Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.”“caught sight of”意思是“看到”，“a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag”此句中的a black box为关键词，应该指Linda的录音带。后文需要围绕这个词描述Mary的心理变化和应对：是及时还给她还是偷偷藏起来？在给的第二段开头中“Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.（听到叫她的名字，玛丽在舞台上走着，她的心跳越来越快。）”Mary 为关键词，后文要对她在舞台上的表现进行描述：伤痛影响发挥而失败还是克服伤痛获得胜利？
范文一第一段中描述了Mary的矛盾心路历程，最终决定将磁带归还并以鼓励：She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note saying “Take it easy, we are the best.”第二段描述了伤痛影响发挥导致比赛失败，但却有结论：Finally, Mary lost the game but she believed she had won everything.
范文二第一段中描述了Mary 的矛盾心理历程，但最终做出决定：She hesitated for a second and then hurried out to give the music tape to Linda. 第二段描述了克服伤痛获得比赛胜利：Mary smiled happily, “I win.”
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