书面表达（满分25分）
友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你以“Friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括；
1.朋友的真谛；2.择友的标准；3.怎样对待朋友。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy.
________________________________
【范文】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy. Real friends are those who can share our sorrows and double all our joys.Nobody can make most of his life without the help of true friends.As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”True friends cherish our ideas and feelings, they will never desert us even when we are in trouble and they will also offer us their most sincere advice when we need it, we should choose those as our friends who have good nature, great abilities and a kind heart.We will treat our friends truly and forgive them for their errors or mistakes and try to help them as much as possible. Only in this way can we keep real friendship in our life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿：友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你以“Friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括；1.朋友的真谛；2.择友的标准；3.怎样对待朋友。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：one of the greatest pleasures（最伟大的快乐之一）；share our sorrows and double all our joys（分担我们的忧伤，倍增我们的欢乐）；make most of his life（充分利用他的生命）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy.使用that引导的定语从句；As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”句中as引导非限制性定语从句；True friends cherish our ideas and feelings, they will never desert us even when we are in trouble and they will also offer us their most sincere advice when we need it,句中when引导时间状语从句；Only in this way can we keep real friendship in our life.部分倒装。
友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你以“Friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括；
1.朋友的真谛；2.择友的标准；3.怎样对待朋友。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy.
________________________________
【范文】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy. Real friends are those who can share our sorrows and double all our joys.Nobody can make most of his life without the help of true friends.As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”True friends cherish our ideas and feelings, they will never desert us even when we are in trouble and they will also offer us their most sincere advice when we need it, we should choose those as our friends who have good nature, great abilities and a kind heart.We will treat our friends truly and forgive them for their errors or mistakes and try to help them as much as possible. Only in this way can we keep real friendship in our life.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿：友谊是人们能享受的最大的快乐之一。假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你以“Friendship”为话题，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括；1.朋友的真谛；2.择友的标准；3.怎样对待朋友。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：one of the greatest pleasures（最伟大的快乐之一）；share our sorrows and double all our joys（分担我们的忧伤，倍增我们的欢乐）；make most of his life（充分利用他的生命）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy.使用that引导的定语从句；As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”句中as引导非限制性定语从句；True friends cherish our ideas and feelings, they will never desert us even when we are in trouble and they will also offer us their most sincere advice when we need it,句中when引导时间状语从句；Only in this way can we keep real friendship in our life.部分倒装。
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