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书面表达假定你是李华,你们学校将邀请平安医院康教授开设讲座。你校英国交换生 Pete

英语作文范文 05-17
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你们学校将邀请平安医院康教授开设讲座。你校英国交换生 Pete想了解讲座的有关事宜。请根据下表内容写一封邮件告知他具体情况。
时间与地点 下周六下午三点
http://xm.jichu.chaoxing.com/api/front/index/first
主题与活动形式 COVID-19 预防 在线收看、留言互动
听讲座前的准备 注册、备好问题……
 
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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范文】Dear Peter,
Learning that you’re interested in the lecture on COVID-19 prevention, I am writing to give further information about it.
Professor Kang from Ping’an Hospital is invited to deliver the lecture, scheduled at 3 next Saturday afternoon. Due to the influence of pandemic, we are supposed to attend the lecture via the link http://xm.jichu.chaoxing.com/api/front/index/first, where we can also interact with the professor using the message board. Think about the questions you would like to ask and do remember to sign up before the live-streamed lecture.
If there is still anything you would like to know, just let me know.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,你们学校将邀请平安医院康教授开设讲座。你校英国交换生 Pete想了解讲座的有关事宜。请根据下表内容写一封邮件告知他具体情况,包括讲座的时间和地点、主题与活动形式以及所需做的准备等。时态应为一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; COVID-19 prevention(新冠病毒防护),lecture(讲座),pandemic(疫情),live-streamed(现场直播的),attend(出席),influence(影响)及deliver(发表、做讲座)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有be supposed to(应该),be interested in(对……感兴趣),due to(由于),interact with(和……交流)以及think about(考虑),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Due to the influence of pandemic, we are supposed to attend the lecture via the link http://xm.jichu.chaoxing.com/api/front/index/first, where we can also interact with the professor using the message board.”,状语从句“If there is still anything you would like to know, just let me know.”,非谓语动词“Learning that you’re interested in the lecture on COVID-19 prevention, I am writing to give further information about it.”及“Professor Kang from Ping’an Hospital is invited to deliver the lecture, scheduled at 3 next Saturday afternoon.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
 
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