书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是班长李华，外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况。你了解情况后，请给他回一封娜件，内容如下：
1．感谢并表达对他的关心；
2．介绍你们学习英语情况和困难；
3．请他提供建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词 疫情epidemic
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
_____________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
How is everything going? On behalf of our classmates, I am writing to express our deepest gratitude and concern for you and also keep you informed of our English learning situation.
During the COVID-19 epidemic, not only do we watch online English classes to review and consolidate what we have learned, but we also spare some time to practise spoken English through online applications since the oral English test is drawing near. To our delight, we find that this kind of drilling does contribute to our language fluency. However, it seems that our pronunciation doesn’t get much improved because we could not tell whether we speak accurately and we are wondering how to solve this problem.
We would really appreciate it if you could give us your constructive suggestions. Please take care of yourself and we are all looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是班长李华，外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况。你了解情况后，请给他回一封娜件，内容如下：1．感谢并表达对他的关心；2．介绍你们学习英语的情况和困难；
3． 请他提供建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：On behalf of our classmates,（代表我们同学）；express our deepest gratitude and concern（表达我们最深切的感激和关心）；keep you informed of our English learning situation（随时向您通报我们的英语学习情况）；practise spoken English through online applications（通过在线申请练习英语口语）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express our deepest gratitude and concern for you and also keep you informed of our English learning situation.句中使用并列句；not only do we watch online English classes to review and consolidate what we have learned, but we also spare some time to practise spoken English through online applications since the oral English test is drawing near.句中使用部分倒装和what引导的宾语从句；it seems that our pronunciation doesn’t get much improved because we could not tell whether we speak accurately and we are wondering how to solve this problem.句中because引导原因状语从句。
假定你是班长李华，外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况。你了解情况后，请给他回一封娜件，内容如下：
1．感谢并表达对他的关心；
2．介绍你们学习英语情况和困难；
3．请他提供建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词 疫情epidemic
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?
_____________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Peter,
How is everything going? On behalf of our classmates, I am writing to express our deepest gratitude and concern for you and also keep you informed of our English learning situation.
During the COVID-19 epidemic, not only do we watch online English classes to review and consolidate what we have learned, but we also spare some time to practise spoken English through online applications since the oral English test is drawing near. To our delight, we find that this kind of drilling does contribute to our language fluency. However, it seems that our pronunciation doesn’t get much improved because we could not tell whether we speak accurately and we are wondering how to solve this problem.
We would really appreciate it if you could give us your constructive suggestions. Please take care of yourself and we are all looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是班长李华，外教Peter发邮件向你询问今年新冠肺炎COVID-19疫情期间同学们学习英语的情况。你了解情况后，请给他回一封娜件，内容如下：1．感谢并表达对他的关心；2．介绍你们学习英语的情况和困难；
3． 请他提供建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：On behalf of our classmates,（代表我们同学）；express our deepest gratitude and concern（表达我们最深切的感激和关心）；keep you informed of our English learning situation（随时向您通报我们的英语学习情况）；practise spoken English through online applications（通过在线申请练习英语口语）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am writing to express our deepest gratitude and concern for you and also keep you informed of our English learning situation.句中使用并列句；not only do we watch online English classes to review and consolidate what we have learned, but we also spare some time to practise spoken English through online applications since the oral English test is drawing near.句中使用部分倒装和what引导的宾语从句；it seems that our pronunciation doesn’t get much improved because we could not tell whether we speak accurately and we are wondering how to solve this problem.句中because引导原因状语从句。
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