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假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.____________________
【范文】Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy. I’d like to give you some advice.
As you know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a variety of food, such as fish and meat, especially fresh vegetables and fruits. You’d better cut down the food rich in sugar or fat. Besides, you should take physical exercise regularly. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。
【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 合理饮食；2.加强锻炼；3.保证睡眠。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。As you know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.定语从句的运用；Therefore, I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late.宾语从句的运用。
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.____________________
【范文】Dear Jack,
I’m so glad to hear from you! In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy. I’d like to give you some advice.
As you know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a variety of food, such as fish and meat, especially fresh vegetables and fruits. You’d better cut down the food rich in sugar or fat. Besides, you should take physical exercise regularly. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。
【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 合理饮食；2.加强锻炼；3.保证睡眠。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。As you know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.定语从句的运用；Therefore, I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late.宾语从句的运用。
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