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写作假定你是李华,你校将举办“中国印象”摄影展。请给你的新西兰朋友Henry写封邮件,

英语作文范文 06-05

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请参加学校举办的“中国印象”摄影展。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段提出写信背景;第二段提出邀请和介绍展览相关信息;第三段寒暄结束。
要求:1.写信背景(hold a photography exhibition; present the beauty of China through photos)
      2. 提出邀请和介绍展览相关信息
      1)提出邀请(Why not)
      2)作品要求,截止日期(be of different sizes; before Mar. 20, 2020)
      3)寒暄结束(Looking forward to your early reply.)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be excited to do; share with; hold an exhibition; the beauty of; why not do; be of different sizes; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m really excited to share with you a piece of good news.
2. Our school is going to hold a photography exhibition themed “Impressions of China” in the library this April, whose aim is to present the beauty of China through photos.
3. So why not send some of your photos of places or people in China that impress you most, and they can be of different sizes.
4. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:
Our school is going to hold a photography exhibition themed “Impressions of China” in the library this April, whose aim is to present the beauty of China through photos.( 今年4月,我校将在图书馆举办以“中国印象”为主题的摄影展,旨在通过照片展示中国之美。)这句话运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
So why not send some of your photos of places or people in China that impress you most, and they can be of different sizes.( 所以为什么不发送一些你在中国印象最深刻的地方或人的照片呢?它们可以是不同大小的。)本句中“that impress you most”为定语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组,如be excited to do; share with; hold an exhibition; the beauty of; why not do; be of different sizes; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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