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书面表达假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mark本学期选修了汉语课程。最近,他来信询问你如何学好汉语。

英语作文范文 07-04

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
semesterChineseadvicelisten topracticeplenty ofas much as possibleappreciateread widelylook forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are learning Chinese this semester.  
2. Let me give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. Firstly you must listen to teacher in class carefully and make sure to keep practicing every day.
4. It will also help if you can read widely.
5. Besides, appreciating movies is another way to improve your Chinese.
6. Look forward to what I say can help you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:To begin with, there is no better way to learn a language well than to listen attentively to your teacher in class and constantly practise after class as mastering a language does require a great deal of practice.这句话运用了as引导的原因状语从句和较为复杂的比较级;使用了一些固定词组,如turn out; contribute to; as much as possible等。文中没有中式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
 
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