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写作(满分25分) 假设你是李华,美国网友Peter将到中国旅游,请你帮忙了解你市Camellia Hotel的情况。请根据以下要点给Peter写一封回信:

英语作文范文 07-16

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信给网友介绍中国旅馆Camellia Hotel的情况。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达欣喜
      2.介绍旅馆相关情况
      1)地理位置与周边环境。(Geographical location and surrounding environment)
      2)服务与设施。(services and facilities)
      3) 价格与付款方式。(price and payment method)
      4) 预定方式。(reservation method)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
finding some information about; first-class service; Located in; it is convenient for; at a reasonable price; make a reservation; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I am happy to be of help in finding some information about Camellia Hotel for you.
2. Camellia Hotel will be a good choice because of its clean environment, first-class service and comfortable facilities.
3. Located in downtown, it is convenient for you to get around.
4. You can pay by either credit card or cash at a reasonable price, but you need to make a reservation on line
5. Looking forward to your coming to our city.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些固定词组,如Located in ; make a reservation; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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