本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请外教老师Henry参加画展。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写信目的
2.询问相关情况
1）画展的时间、地点。（time and place）
2）画展的目的和意义。（purpose and meaning）
3) 表达期待。（expectation）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Chinese paintings; aim to; interested in; appreciate; be sure; definitely; unique beauty; inspire; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to invite you to the exhibition of Chinese paintings
2. Since this event aims to help more people learn about the beauty of our hometown,
3. everyone interested in it are welcome.
4. through which visitors will not only appreciate the beauty
5. but definitely feel the unique beauty of Chinese paintings.
6. I’m sure the exhibition will inspire our passion to love our hometown and our motherland.
7. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：which引导的定语从句I'm writing to invite you to the exhibition of Chinese paintings which will be held by our school at the Art Center this Friday afternoon, from 2pm to 5pm.At the exhibition, many Chinese paintings painted by famous artists will be exhibited, through which visitors will not only appreciate the beauty and great changes of our hometown but definitely feel the unique beauty of Chinese paintings.这句话运用了“介词+关系词”引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如aim to; interested in; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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