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写作(满分15分) 假定你是高一学生李华,你校学生将在暑假进行“读一本好书”的活动,以鼓励每个学生都参与到阅读当中。你的英国朋友Leslie

英语作文范文 08-05

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向朋友介绍学校举办的“读一本好书”活动的相关情况以及个人建议。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段为写信背景(已给出);第二段讲述关于活动的相关情况;第三段提出个人建议。
要求:1.写信背景
      2.关于活动的相关情况
      1)原因:不良现象的存在(prefer to spend much time in watching TV ; be crazy about the Internet)
      2)阅读的好处(necessary; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality)
      3.个人建议(suggest; read at least one or two good books every term)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
prefer to; spend much time doing; be crazy about; what’s worse; not only…but also; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality; develop a good habit of doing; at least
第三步:连词成句
1. As we know, nowadays a lot of students prefer to spend much time in watching TV and they are crazy about the Internet.
2. And what’s worse, they don’t like reading.
3. I firmly think that by reading not only can we enrich our life and broaden our horizons but also we can learn to perfect our personality.
4. Now that reading is good for us, let’s develop a good habit of reading.
5. I strongly suggest that every one of us should read at least one or two good books every term.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了高级句式结构和一些主从复合句,如:
I firmly think that by reading not only can we enrich our life and broaden our horizons but also we can learn to perfect our personality.(我坚定地认为,通过阅读不仅可以丰富我们的生活,开阔我们的视野,而且我们可以学习完善我们的人格。)这句话运用了not only…but also并列句结构,且在that宾语从句中将not only置于从句句首部分而使用了部分倒装句式。
Now that reading is good for us, let’s develop a good habit of reading.(既然阅读对我们有好处,就让我们养成阅读的好习惯吧。)这句话中now that引导原因状语从句。
I strongly suggest that every one of us should read at least one or two good books every term.(我强烈建议我们每个人每学期至少要读一到两本好书。)这句话中that引导宾语从句,且由于谓语suggest意为“建议”,that引导宾语从句为虚拟语气句式结构。
2.使用了一些固定词组,如prefer to; spend much time doing; be crazy about; what’s worse; not only…but also; enrich our life and broaden our horizons; perfect our personality; develop a good habit of doing; at least等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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