读后续写Many people have role models or people they look up to in their life. They may be actors, super

I’m fortunate enough to have a thoughtful enough mom to help me through hard times. Ever since I could remember, my mom has done whatever she could to help me in numerous things. Whether I was struggling in a class or just needed someone to be there for support, my mom was always the first one there. In the fourth grade, I became very sick and fell far behind in school. I almost didn’t pass a few exams due to absence, but my mom worked with me, stayed up late to help me, and talked to my teachers asking for help. As a result, I caught up and moved in to the fifth grade smoothly.
Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.
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这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章中作者主要描述了自己崇拜的榜样是自己的母亲，并列举了自己崇拜母亲的几个方面。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我很幸运，有一位体贴入微的母亲帮助我度过难关。所以后文应该是讲述母亲帮助作者度过难关的事情；第二段开头是：每个人都有一个值得敬仰的榜样。本段应该为总结全文，作者崇拜母亲的原因是长得漂亮，有头脑，而且是作者所知道的最善良的人之一。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：for support, fall far behind, due to, ask for help等高级词汇；Ever since I could remember, my mom has done whatever she could to help me in numerous things.宾语从句；Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.时间状语从句等高级句式。