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假定你是李华，受新型冠状病毒疫情影响，你校决定进行网上学习。请你根据以下 提示用英语给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习：
1 .进行网上学习的原因；2.如何使用钉钉软件开展网上学习。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus 钉钉Ding Talk
【答案】Dear Peter，
Since the novel coronavirus broke out last December, everyone's life and study have been greatly affected. As a result, our school has adopted online learning. I'd like to share some information on it with you.
First, you need to download an app called Ding Talk, which is designed for users to communicate on the Internet. Then, you can register your account with your smart phone and have online classes, where our teachers can interact with us as well as give lectures. It's obvious that Ding Talk makes it convenient for us to study at home.
I hope you will enjoy the online learning. If you come across any problem, don't hesitate to ask me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达考查应用文写作。给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习。
【详解】根据所给提示，假定你是李华，受新型冠状病毒疫情影响，你校决定进行网上学习。请你根据以下提示用英语给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习：1 .进行网上学习的原因；2.如何使用钉钉软件开展网上学习。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：break out；be designed for；interact with；as well as；come across等。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：First, you need to download an app called Ding Talk, which is designed for users to communicate on the Internet.和Then, you can register your account with your smart phone and have online classes, where our teachers can interact with us as well as give lectures.运用了定语从句。It's obvious that Ding Talk makes it convenient for us to study at home.使用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，受新型冠状病毒疫情影响，你校决定进行网上学习。请你根据以下 提示用英语给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习：
1 .进行网上学习的原因；2.如何使用钉钉软件开展网上学习。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus 钉钉Ding Talk
【答案】Dear Peter，
Since the novel coronavirus broke out last December, everyone's life and study have been greatly affected. As a result, our school has adopted online learning. I'd like to share some information on it with you.
First, you need to download an app called Ding Talk, which is designed for users to communicate on the Internet. Then, you can register your account with your smart phone and have online classes, where our teachers can interact with us as well as give lectures. It's obvious that Ding Talk makes it convenient for us to study at home.
I hope you will enjoy the online learning. If you come across any problem, don't hesitate to ask me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达考查应用文写作。给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习。
【详解】根据所给提示，假定你是李华，受新型冠状病毒疫情影响，你校决定进行网上学习。请你根据以下提示用英语给你校的交换生Peter写一封邮件，告诉他如何进行网上学习：1 .进行网上学习的原因；2.如何使用钉钉软件开展网上学习。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：break out；be designed for；interact with；as well as；come across等。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：First, you need to download an app called Ding Talk, which is designed for users to communicate on the Internet.和Then, you can register your account with your smart phone and have online classes, where our teachers can interact with us as well as give lectures.运用了定语从句。It's obvious that Ding Talk makes it convenient for us to study at home.使用了主语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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