阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为120左右。 The rain was sudden and heavy on a cold night ov

The rain was getting bigger and bigger, and I was just holding my daughter for fear that she would rain. At the same time, I stood by the road and stared at the road, hoping to have a car that could be taken. Time one minute quietly past, the daughter said hungry. However, there was no sign of a car and I was disappointed.
Just when I was confused, I didn't know when a man was standing beside me. He tapped me on the shoulder and said, "Take my car and go. I've come to pick up the kids, too. I was late." I turned around and realized it was the parent who had arrived late. I nodded gratefully and said "thank you". My daughter and I made it home.
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这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是作者在下雨天去托儿所接女儿的故事。由于下雨，没车，作者搭乘一个家长的车，回到了家，他非常感激这位家长。
【详解】1.第一段给出的首句是The rain was getting bigger and bigger, and I was just holding my daughter for fear that she would rain.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“与此同时，我站在路旁紧紧盯着马路，希望能有一辆可以搭乘的车。”入手扩展开去，——无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2.第二段所给首句Just when I was confused, I didn't know when a man was standing beside me.这一句呼应前文，紧接着可以从“他轻轻拍了我的肩膀一下，并安慰我说，‘坐我的车走吧，我也是来接孩子的，来晚了。’”入手续写。
【点睛】这是一篇续写。文章段落衔接紧密，句与句之间环环相扣，且句中使用高级句子。At the same time, I stood by the road and stared at the road, hoping to have a car that could be taken.句中使用现在分词作伴随状语和定语从句；句中when引导时间状语从句；I turned around and realized it was the parent who had arrived late.句中使用宾语和强调句式；At the same time, However,等的使用为文章增色添彩。