本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生描述端午节的由来和习俗
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时
要求：1. 介绍端午节的由来
2. 介绍端午节的习俗
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; made progress; patriotic poet; be wrapped with; drowned oneself;
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m very happy to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture.
2. you’ve made much progress in learning Chinese.
3. Actually the Dragon Boat Festival is held to honor an ancient Chinese patriotic poet, Qu Yuan.
4. He drowned himself on May 5thbecause his motherland was occupied.
5. It is wrapped with bamboo leaves.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You told me our monitor gave you several Zongzi but you didn’t know how to enjoy it.这句话运用宾语从句，省略了关系词that，If you unfasten the thread and take off the leaves, you can enjoy the delicious snack.运用了条件状语从句，固定搭配运用了如be interested in; made progress; patriotic poet; be wrapped with; drowned oneself; 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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