书面表达(满分25分) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Dick对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他打算近期到中国具有文化底蕴的地方旅游。请你给他写封电子邮件，推荐几个他可能感兴趣的景点。
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书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Dick对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他打算近期到中国具有文化底蕴的地方旅游。请你给他写封电子邮件，推荐几个他可能感兴趣的景点。内容包括：
1.推荐地点；
2. 推荐理由；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Dick,
______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Dick,
I’m delighted to learn that you are coming to China for a visit. And I’m writing to recommend some historic sites that may interest you.
As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down. The first city that you can’t miss is Beijing, which is the capital city of China. There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors. In addition, the city of Xi’an will never fail to attract you with its world-famous historic heritage of the Terracotta Army. Of course, other cities such as Shanghai and Nanjing are also good choices for you.
I sincerely hope that you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Dick对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他打算近期到中国具有文化底蕴的地方旅游。请你给他写封电子邮件，推荐几个他可能感兴趣的景点。内容包括：1.推荐地点；2. 推荐理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：coming to China for a visit（来到中国访问）；As you know,（众所周知）；with a number of cultural heritages passed down.（传承了许多文化遗产）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。And I’m writing to recommend some historic sites that may interest you.句中使用定语从句；As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors.句中使用非限制性定语从句；另外，In addition, have a good time等的运用为文章增色添彩。
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Dick对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他打算近期到中国具有文化底蕴的地方旅游。请你给他写封电子邮件，推荐几个他可能感兴趣的景点。内容包括：
1.推荐地点；
2. 推荐理由；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Dick,
______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Dick,
I’m delighted to learn that you are coming to China for a visit. And I’m writing to recommend some historic sites that may interest you.
As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down. The first city that you can’t miss is Beijing, which is the capital city of China. There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors. In addition, the city of Xi’an will never fail to attract you with its world-famous historic heritage of the Terracotta Army. Of course, other cities such as Shanghai and Nanjing are also good choices for you.
I sincerely hope that you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Dick对中国的传统文化很感兴趣。他打算近期到中国具有文化底蕴的地方旅游。请你给他写封电子邮件，推荐几个他可能感兴趣的景点。内容包括：1.推荐地点；2. 推荐理由。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：coming to China for a visit（来到中国访问）；As you know,（众所周知）；with a number of cultural heritages passed down.（传承了许多文化遗产）；等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。And I’m writing to recommend some historic sites that may interest you.句中使用定语从句；As you know, China has a long history with a number of cultural heritages passed down.句中as引导非限制性定语从句；There are many scenic spots in Beijing, of which the Palace Museum is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors.句中使用非限制性定语从句；另外，In addition, have a good time等的运用为文章增色添彩。
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