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请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 A video showing a traffic police officer pretending to be blind being

英语作文范文 03-09

A video about the virtually impaired being denied permission to get on the bus pulls back the curtain on the truth that they suffer much inconvenience and especially people’s indifference in daily life.
To be frank, I sympathize with the guide dog and its owner. First, the cold shoulder to the blind opens the door to a society where the disabled feel nothing but despair. Isn’t it an irony to just shout empty slogans of harmony? Besides, we can’t stand leaving the blind helpless with nowhere to go, nor can we deprive them of the normal human right.
This social problem deserves due attention. For one thing, improving public facilities for the visually disabled should top the list. For another, a harmonious society necessitates the promotion of positive values like being helpful and the fight against discrimination.
However, we cannot pay lip service but take action so that the blind can feel a ray of warmness in their life.
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【分析】
本书面表达属于读写任务写作。考生先要概括文章概要,然后表达对拒绝盲人和导盲犬的看法,最后就如何帮助视觉障碍人士提出建议。
【详解】动笔前,首先要认真阅读原文,并理解其内容。其次,认真看清题目要求,在稿子上列出提纲。最后,根据要求写出文章。写作的时候,要按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,要注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:to be frank, deprive … of, For one thing, For another, take action等高级词汇;A video about the virtually impaired being denied permission to get on the bus pulls back the curtain on the truth that they suffer much inconvenience and especially people’s indifference in daily life.运用了同位语从句;First, the cold shoulder to the blind opens the door to a society where the disabled feel nothing but despair. 运用了定语从句;Taking her child to school becomes an easy and pleasant thing.运用了动名词做主语;Besides, we can’t stand leaving the blind helpless with nowhere to go, nor can we deprive them of the normal human right.运用了倒装句。
 
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