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书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Leslie 给你发邮件询问你在新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间是怎么度过。请你根据下列要点写一封邮件回复她:

英语试题 08-04

2.  怎么度过; 
3. 你的感受。
 
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
break out/ share sth. with sb./ stay at/ take exercises/ pay attention to/ keep healthy/ spare no efforts to do sth./ look forward to/ not only…but also
第三步:连词成句
1.    Having received your letter, I feel very happy.
2.    You asked me to share you what I’m doing in the epidemic situation.
3.    My experiences are as follows.
4.    Since novel coronavirus pneumonia broke out in Wuhan in December, 2019, I have been staying at home, not going out.
5.    On the one hand, I closely focus on the epidemic situation through watching CCTV news or surfing the Internet.
6.    On the other hand, I insist on studying.  
7.    Not only do I read books, but also attend online courses given by my teachers every day.
8.    What's more, in order to keep healthy, I take exercise every day.
9.    Faced with the disaster, many people including doctors, nurses and scientists act bravely and spare no efforts to fight against it.
10.    As far as I am concerned, they are real heroes.
11.    Thank you for your concern.
12.    I'm looking forward to your reply.
 
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级句型,例如:You asked me to share with you what I'm doing in the epidemic situation.中what引导宾语从句;Not only do I read classics, but also I have online courses given by my teachers.运用了部分倒装。Faced with the disaster, many people including doctors, nurses and scientists act bravely and spare no effort to fight against it.中使用分词作状语。这些句型的使用,给文章增色不少。
 
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