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书面表达假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Sandy得知你市将举办中国年画(Chinese New Year paintings)

英语作文范文 05-05
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Sandy得知你市将举办中国年画(Chinese New Year paintings)展,发邮件向你询问相关情况。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 简述年画的寓意(喜庆、祈福、迎新等);
2. 告知展览的相关情况(时间、地点和目的);
3. 提出一起参观年画展。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sandy,
____________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sandy,
Although the Spring Festival has passed, the atmosphere of the New Year remains in our city. Many people are still interested in Chinese New Year pictures, which symbolize happiness, blessing and greeting the New Year. I’m glad to share with you some information about the exhibition of Chinese New Year paintings.
In order to promote China’s unique traditional folk culture, our city will hold the exhibition. It is to be held in the city exhibition hall at 3:00 pm this Sunday.
Some paintings full of various colors and patterns will be on show. Let’s visit the exhibition to enjoy the paintings on site together.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向留学生朋友Sandy介绍中国年画(Chinese New Year paintings)展。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文;
人称:第三人称为主;
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总-分-总法;
要点:
1. 简述年画的寓意(喜庆、祈福、迎新等);
2. 告知展览的相关情况(时间、地点和目的);
3. 提出一起参观年画展。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
the Spring Festival;Chinese New Year paintings;atmosphere;New Year;be interested in;be to do;symbolize;blessing;share with;exhibition;promote;traditional folk culture;exhibition hall;full of;on show等
第三步:连词成句
1. Although the Spring Festival has passed, the atmosphere of the New Year remains in our city.
2. Many people are still interested in Chinese New Year pictures, which symbolize happiness, blessing and greeting the New Year.
3. I’m glad to share with you some information about the exhibition of Chinese New Year paintings.
4. In order to promote China’s unique traditional folk culture, our city will hold the exhibition.
5. It is to be held in the city exhibition hall at 3:00 pm this Sunday.
6. Some paintings full of various colors and patterns will be on show.
7. Let’s visit the exhibition to enjoy the paintings on site together.
8. Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表转折对比关系:Although+clause(从句);
2.表并列补充关系:still;and;
3.表示目的关系:in order to等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型,如:Although the Spring Festival has passed, the atmosphere of the New Year remains in our city.使用了由although引导的让步状语从句;Many people are still interested in Chinese New Year pictures, which symbolize happiness, blessing and greeting the New Year.使用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句;In order to promote China’s unique traditional folk culture, our city will hold the exhibition.使用了不定式作目的状语;Let’s visit the exhibition to enjoy the paintings on site together.使用了祈使句等。还使用了一些固定短语:be interested in;be to do;share with;traditional folk culture;full of;on show等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
 



 
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