书面表达（15 分）
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Hannah 就读于顺义某国际学校。她热爱中国文化，尤其喜欢京剧。六月一日下午 2:00 在梅兰芳大剧院将上演由现代著名京剧演员刘长瑜女士表演的京剧《木兰从军》， 请你根据以下提示，用英语给 Hannah 写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起观看演出。内容包括:
1.告知演出时间，地点；
2.提出邀请并简述原因；
3.请求对方回复。
提示词：木兰从军 Mulan Joins the Army
梅兰芳大剧院 Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre
Dear Hannah,
How is everything going?
__________________________________
【范文】Dear Hannah,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.
Mulan Joins the Army, known as one of the most famous Beijing Opera, will be put on in Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre on the afternoon of June 1st. It will be performed by Liu Changyu, a famous artist/actress. Usually fans will get there around 1:30 p.m. , but it won’t be performed until 2 o’clock sharp. It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.
The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows. To start with, since you always show great interest in Beijing Opera, this is a great chance for you to be exposed to the rich opera atmosphere and have your visual and auditory senses fully fulfilled. Besides, it also provides you a chance to refresh yourself from the heavy study load. You know, there is nothing better than music for a person to relax with, let alone the wonderful live opera show. Most importantly, I do think the opera will benefit you a lot in understanding the unique traditional Chinese culture and inspire you to pursue your dream like Mulan.
So what do you think of it? Would you like to come? If you’re interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can book the tickets for us.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求以李华的名义给美国朋友Hannah 写一封电子邮件。
【详解】本文为书信类作文，要求写一封电子邮件，邀请Hannah 一起观看京剧《木兰从军》演出，包括告知Hannah演出时间，地点，并简述邀请原因。虽然要点已经给出，但是需要进行适当的扩展，如简要介绍《木兰从军》的内容、邀请的原因等等。注意使用连接词，使作文连贯，注意时态，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.这句话运用了现在分词作状语；It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.和The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows.这两句话运用了定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be known as ; as soon as possible; so that等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Hannah 就读于顺义某国际学校。她热爱中国文化，尤其喜欢京剧。六月一日下午 2:00 在梅兰芳大剧院将上演由现代著名京剧演员刘长瑜女士表演的京剧《木兰从军》， 请你根据以下提示，用英语给 Hannah 写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起观看演出。内容包括:
1.告知演出时间，地点；
2.提出邀请并简述原因；
3.请求对方回复。
提示词：木兰从军 Mulan Joins the Army
梅兰芳大剧院 Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre
Dear Hannah,
How is everything going?
__________________________________
【范文】Dear Hannah,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.
Mulan Joins the Army, known as one of the most famous Beijing Opera, will be put on in Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre on the afternoon of June 1st. It will be performed by Liu Changyu, a famous artist/actress. Usually fans will get there around 1:30 p.m. , but it won’t be performed until 2 o’clock sharp. It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.
The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows. To start with, since you always show great interest in Beijing Opera, this is a great chance for you to be exposed to the rich opera atmosphere and have your visual and auditory senses fully fulfilled. Besides, it also provides you a chance to refresh yourself from the heavy study load. You know, there is nothing better than music for a person to relax with, let alone the wonderful live opera show. Most importantly, I do think the opera will benefit you a lot in understanding the unique traditional Chinese culture and inspire you to pursue your dream like Mulan.
So what do you think of it? Would you like to come? If you’re interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can book the tickets for us.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【分析】
本书面表达是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求以李华的名义给美国朋友Hannah 写一封电子邮件。
【详解】本文为书信类作文，要求写一封电子邮件，邀请Hannah 一起观看京剧《木兰从军》演出，包括告知Hannah演出时间，地点，并简述邀请原因。虽然要点已经给出，但是需要进行适当的扩展，如简要介绍《木兰从军》的内容、邀请的原因等等。注意使用连接词，使作文连贯，注意时态，人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a fabulous Beijing Opera.这句话运用了现在分词作状语；It tells an inspiring story of a girl named Mulan who joins the army for her father and finally becomes a general through her own efforts.和The reasons why I would like to send you the invitation are as follows.这两句话运用了定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be known as ; as soon as possible; so that等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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