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Jenny was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother

英语作文范文 05-21

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Approaching the doorway. Jenny took a deep breath. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. “Where might my mother be?" she wondered. “Is she really so angry with me that she doesn't want to show any care for me? Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother, and she just realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a 1ot about her. Tears rolled down her cheeks.
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A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head to see the familiar face and the worried eyes. “Here you come! I've been looking for you," came the tired voice. Jenny couldn't help but throw herself into her mother's arms. “I'm sorry and thank you for all you have done for me." She expressed the sincere apology and the great gratitude. Then she felt the hug tightened.
 解析
这是一篇读后续写。
1把握短文核心内容。仔细阅读所给短文,把握短文核心内容是完成续写的前提。本文讲的是一个故事。Jenny和妈妈吵架跑出去,没有钱吃饭。一个陌生人请她吃了一碗面条,她感激万分陌生人提醒她,为什么对陌生人的一碗面条感激不已,却从没有想过自己的妈妈为自己做了多少事情。
2.预测故事发展。根据已知人物、事件及续写段落首段进行预测。
4.罗列写作要点。结合文本中划线词语和预测,展开想象,罗列出故事情节的发展。
4.连词成篇。结合罗列的要点,恰当的使用衔接词。避免重复使用同一个单词或短语,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等,但一定要与原文保持风格一致。
5.认真检查,检查行文是否流畅、合逻辑,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰, 短语使用单词拼写是否正确等。
 
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