【分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人的相关信息。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段提出话题“一款生活型智能机器人”；第二段讲述其功能特点；第三段说明其意义。
要求：1.提出话题（an intelligent robot）
2.介绍相关情况：功能强大（so many powerful functions）
1）做家务（do all the housework）
2）照顾幼小（take good care of the elderly and the sick）
3) 网络娱乐（surf the Internet;entertain）
3. 意义阐述
1）体现科技发展（show the rapid development of science and technology of our country）
2）生活助手（will be a big helper）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
2. So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.
3. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour.
4. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them.
5. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.
6. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
7. There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.
8. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including
3.表因果关系：because; as; so; thus; therefore; as a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.( 近年来，一个智能机器人，由太阳能驱动，这是环保的，已经被设计在我们的生活中提供日常援助的科学家在我们的国家。)这句话运用了which引导定语从句。
So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.( 这个智能机器人有这么多强大的功能，它可以在各个方面帮助我们。)该句中使用了so that结果状语从句，且将“So+adj.”结构置于句首，使该句使用了部分倒装句式。
Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.( 当然，您还可以利用这个机器人，不仅可以与它通信，还可以通过它浏览网络以收集大量信息。)该句使用了not only…but(also)并列句结构。
There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.( 毫无疑问，这种智能机器人的创造表明了我国科学技术的迅速发展。)该句使用了固定句式“there’s no doubt that…”，其中that引导同位语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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