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书面表达(满分25分) 为了号召大家多读书,你校组织了一次“阅读日”(Reading Day)活动。假设你是校英文报的记者,

英语作文范文 07-21

结构:总分总 
要求:
1.活动目的
2.活动时间,地点和参加者
3.活动内容
4. 简短评论
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
call on sb. to do sth./ take part in/ launch/ in one’s spare time/ advocate/ be divided into/ exchange/ attend/ arouse/ impress sth. on sb.
第三步:连词成句
1.In order to call on more students to read more widely in their spare time, our school launched a campaign of "Reading Day" on June 1 in our school library.
2. All the students in our school took part.
3. In the morning, our principal delivered a passionate speech to advocate reading hungrily and decided on a novel to read together.
4. After that, all the students were divided into groups to read different chapters of "Gone with the wind" and then exchanged their ideas about it.
5. At the end of the activity, the students attended a knowledge contest on the novel.
6. This successful event not only impressed on the students the significance of reading but also aroused their interest in it.
 
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型,例如:Not only did this successful event impress on the students the significance of reading but also aroused their interest in it.中使用了部分倒装。动词不定式做目的状语To call on more students to read more widely in their spare time, our school launched a campaign of "Reading Day" on June 1 in our school library. Students of the whole school took part.
 
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